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原文：
按我們的談話, 我想double confirm今個星期散貨的shipment schedule ( closing (日期&時間), etd, eta), 另外可否令late come, 最遲可令到幾時&幾點?!

譯文：
According to our talk, I would like to confirm once more this week CFS shipment schedule (including closing date & time, ETD & ETA). Moreover, any late come can be given? When is the most latest deadline of the late come can be given?

(注：如果有多過一次嘅談話嘅話，咁譯文裡面個 "talk" 就要改成 "talks"，表示多過一次嘅談話。
另外，"CFS" 可以用 "LCL" 嚟代替，雖然佢哋嘅全寫唔同，但係佢哋係可以互換嘅。
("CFS" stand for "Container Freight Station"，"LCL" stand for "Less Container Load"))


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2010-07-28 01:41:00 補充：
更正：上面譯文嘅 "late come" 全部更改為 "late coming delivery"，請留意。

2010-07-28 12:29:13 補充：
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2010-07-28 13:16:14 補充：
Translation for Logistic particular terms (in Chinese) :

late come = 延遲交貨入倉 (或交貨柜入貨柜碼頭)
closing date / closing time = 截數 (截止交貨入倉 / 截止交柜入碼頭) 日期 / 截數時間

2010-07-30 14:28:08 補充：
ETD stand for Estimated Time of Departure (預計離港時間)
ETA stand for Estimated Time of Arrival (預計到達時間)

您所說的late come , closing date, closing time 是否分別指late shipment , date of late shipment and time of late shipment ?

是呀~

With reference to our talk, I would like to re-confirm this week's shipment schedule of LCL(including date of late delivery/shipment, time of late delivery/shipment, ETA and ETD). Please inform us of the deadline of shipment which may be acceptable to you.

I am looking forward to receiving your reply.



2010-07-28 00:05:54 補充：
發問者: 您所說的late come , closing date, closing time 是否分別指late shipment , date of late shipment and time of late shipment ? 煩請予以確認.