中翻英 - 「你若不離不棄，我必生死相依。」?
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2020-10-27 10:52 pm
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Give up not on me and I will be with you, think and thin. 
2020-10-28 12:40 pm
冰與火之歌裡的誓詞裡，『至死方休』都是用until the end of my days，
覺得蠻好的也很貼切。
If you don't leave me, I will always be with you until the end of my days.
如果要強調從今日起，可以加上from this day
If you don't leave me, I will always be with you from this day until the end of my days.
覺得蠻好的也很貼切。
If you don't leave me, I will always be with you until the end of my days.
如果要強調從今日起，可以加上from this day
If you don't leave me, I will always be with you from this day until the end of my days.
參考: 冰與火之歌
2020-10-28 11:45 am
從閣下的評語看來，你的英語造詣應該不錯，若不嫌棄，把中文的意會說成英語人會說的同義(加上你又要求有"我"有"你")：
If you choose not to leave me, I will love to till the end of time.
中詩修辭採用了"同意叠詞"="離-棄"表達選擇的主動性，又用了"對比叠詞"="生死"表達"今生"配以含蓄意會的"相依"表達"愛"。英語雖然亦有些類似"暗喻"的代詞，但在原文的隱喻上變成另一種穩喻或許"太隱"了，因此英譯把當中一些應該明示的寫明(you choose not to leave me)，用上英語中已有的同義(love you till the end of time是常見的"至死不渝"之意)代入。
結果難免失去中文原文的詩意或短句變得"長氣"很多，但意義上才能包含原文當中的"條件要求和承諾"含意。
若然要變成簡而含蓄的對等說法，我會反轉再反轉來譯說：
If you stay with me, you will be more than life to me.
If you choose not to leave me, I will love to till the end of time.
中詩修辭採用了"同意叠詞"="離-棄"表達選擇的主動性，又用了"對比叠詞"="生死"表達"今生"配以含蓄意會的"相依"表達"愛"。英語雖然亦有些類似"暗喻"的代詞，但在原文的隱喻上變成另一種穩喻或許"太隱"了，因此英譯把當中一些應該明示的寫明(you choose not to leave me)，用上英語中已有的同義(love you till the end of time是常見的"至死不渝"之意)代入。
結果難免失去中文原文的詩意或短句變得"長氣"很多，但意義上才能包含原文當中的"條件要求和承諾"含意。
若然要變成簡而含蓄的對等說法，我會反轉再反轉來譯說：
If you stay with me, you will be more than life to me.
2020-11-02 9:11 pm
If you were never to abandon me ; I’ll always be by your side till death do us apart.
參考: 婚禮誓詞
2020-10-28 9:06 pm
Till Death do us part, I will do so. If you being honor to me.
2020-10-28 1:47 pm
Desert me not and I shall stick with you until I die.
Abandon me not and we will stick together through thick and thin.
Abandon me not and we will stick together through thick and thin.
2020-10-28 4:34 pm
If you do'nt leave, I will live with you forever.
2020-10-28 12:22 am
Don't give up=If you don't give up;
I will live and die together with you
=love you till the end of time
=my love for you will never die始終不渝
=I will be with you to have a "thin and thick" time
=have an uncomfortable, distasteful life through and a comfortable, tasteful life together through
=Give up not on me and I will be with you, thin and thick.
I will live and die together with you
=love you till the end of time
=my love for you will never die始終不渝
=I will be with you to have a "thin and thick" time
=have an uncomfortable, distasteful life through and a comfortable, tasteful life together through
=Give up not on me and I will be with you, thin and thick.
2020-10-30 12:55 pm
Be with me forever, then I will do so.
簡單説：你永遠都陪伴我的話，我也會伴你一生。
簡單説：你永遠都陪伴我的話，我也會伴你一生。
2020-10-28 1:29 am
🔷 If you don't leave me, I will live and die by your side.
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