Dear Mr Ts( with reference to / other that / due to ) your recent application for credit with our firm, we regret to inform you that we cannot extend credit terms to you at the present time ( owing to / in order to / apart from) the evaluation of your present financial situation as reported by the credit bureau.
(if / although / since) you feel that there may be some errors in the records of the credit reporting agency, we suggest that you contact them in order to review their current information (should / could / would) there have been errors made, please direct them to submit a revised report to us for our reconsideration.
Please feel free to call me if I can be of further assistance.
Yours
Stephen Tsui
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2018-03-11 8:04 pm
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2018-03-11 9:19 pm
Dear Mr Ts
WITH REFERENCE TO your recent application for credit with our firm, we regret to inform you that we cannot extend credit terms to you at the present time OWING TO the evaluation of your present financial situation as reported by the credit bureau.
IF you feel that there may be some errors in the records of the credit reporting agency, we suggest that you contact them in order to review their current information. SHOULD there have been errors made, please direct them to submit a revised report to us for our reconsideration.
Please feel free to call me if I can be of further assistance.
Yours
Stephen Tsui
WITH REFERENCE TO your recent application for credit with our firm, we regret to inform you that we cannot extend credit terms to you at the present time OWING TO the evaluation of your present financial situation as reported by the credit bureau.
IF you feel that there may be some errors in the records of the credit reporting agency, we suggest that you contact them in order to review their current information. SHOULD there have been errors made, please direct them to submit a revised report to us for our reconsideration.
Please feel free to call me if I can be of further assistance.
Yours
Stephen Tsui
2018-03-15 9:27 am
Dear Mr Ts, with reference to your recent application for credit with our firm, we regret to inform you that we cannot extend credit terms to you at the present time, owing to the evaluation of your present financial situation as reported by the credit bureau.
If you feel that there may be some errors in the records of the credit reporting agency, we suggest that you contact them in order to review their current information ;should there have been errors made, please direct them to submit a revised report to us for our reconsideration.
Please feel free to call me if I can be of further assistance.
Yours
Stephen Tsui
If you feel that there may be some errors in the records of the credit reporting agency, we suggest that you contact them in order to review their current information ;should there have been errors made, please direct them to submit a revised report to us for our reconsideration.
Please feel free to call me if I can be of further assistance.
Yours
Stephen Tsui
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