急，中文信翻譯英文信

Thanks a lot for your arrangements. As a result of that, XXX (your fiancée's name) accepted my marriage proposal, allowing both of us to embark on a new phase of life.

When I saw you last time, I noticed some cracks on the screen of your cell phone. You certainly need a new cell phone. We have just bought you the most popular cell phone. Please accept this gift as a small token of our gratitude. If you have any problems concerning the functions of this cell phone, please feel free to contact me at any time via Whatsapp. My phone number in Hong Kong is 12345.

We look forward to seeing you in Hong Kong. Please allow us to show our hospitality in return.

Wish you every success in your work. Keep in touch!

2014-06-09 02:13:47 補充：
牛津字典是無 anytime 這個字

取自 Fowler's Modern English Usage (- Oxford University Press)
"anytime - another characteristically American adverb"

anytime 現時很流行, 特別在 conversation
at any time 是傳統 English, 尤其 formal text.
書寫 at any time, even 美國人肯接受

http://grammarist.com/spelling/anytime-any-time/

2014-06-09 02:36:03 補充：
crack 多數用 in, e.g. cracks in the wall
但有時可以用 on, 是強調在 surface (表面,平面,外表)
surface crack on the car tyre (tire)

"How to Repair a Crack on a Wood Surface"
http://www.behr.com/consumer_ca/how-to/exterior/how-to-repair-a-crack-on-a-wood-surface

2014-06-10 04:13:32 補充：
“1 referring back

You can use that and those to refer to people, things, or events which have already been mentioned or which are already known about’

~ from Collins Cobuild English Usage

people, things, events 是 plural

2014-06-10 04:42:40 補充：
As a result of that…這個 that 字, 雖然是單數, that 是指整件事, 整件事包括 a few arrangements.

這兩個字 arrangements 和 that, 不是在一句中出現, 是在兩句子分開地寫, 無 subject-verb agreement 問題.

2014-06-10 04:56:06 補充：
除牛津字典外, 遠東英漢五用辭典 (主編梁實秋), Merriam-Webster Children's Dictionary 都是無 “anytime” 這個字

“anytime or any time?
This word is usually rendered any time in British English and careful users avoid anytime, the accepted form in American English.”
~ from “Good Word Guide”

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I don't think there is a specific preposition after 'crack'. The preposition precedes the noun, a crack 'on the surface' of the table, for example.

Thank you so much for your arrangements for me to propose
successfully, let us entered a new stage of life.

I saw your cellphone's screen broken last time, I'm quite sure you
need a new phone now, so that we had bought the most popular
cellphone to you for expressing our grateful. My Hong Kong cellphone
number as following: 12345. You can whatsapp me if you have any
questions about the function of cellphone.

I hope you'll come to Hong Kong again, we will give you a warm hospitality.

Hope you work pleasantly, and keep in touch.

十分感謝你的按排令我求婚成功，令我們人生進入了新的階段。

上次見到你的手機顯示屏破碎了，我相信你一定需要一部新手機，所以我們買了現在最流行的手機給你，以表示我們的心意，以下是我的香港聯絡電話：12345，如果你對手機功能上有任何問題可以除時whats app我。

希望你有機會到香港，我們一定會給你熱情的款待。

祝工作愉快，保持聯絡。

翻譯


Sub thank you arrange me to marry him success, so we entered a new phase of life.

Last saw your phone screen broken, I'm sure you need a new phone, so we bought now the most popular cell phone to you to express our mind, the following is my Hong Kong Tel: 12345, If you have any questions on the phone can function except when whats app me.

I hope you have a chance to go to Hong Kong, we will give you a warm welcome.

I wish happiness and keep in touch.

Thank you so much that I am arranging to marry successful, we entered a new
phase of life.


Last time I saw your cell phone display screen is broken, I'm sure you need a new cell phone, so we bought the most popular mobile phone to give you, as an expression of our own heart, my Hong Kong contact telephone numbers are as follows: 12345, if you have any questions on the phone features you can in addition to
whats app me.


I hope you have the opportunity to Hong Kong, we will certainly give you a warm
welcome.


Wishing happiness, keep in touch.

Thank you very much for me to marry him success by row, so we have entered a new stage of life.

Last saw your phone screen broken, I'm sure you need a new phone, so we bought now the most popular cell phone to you to express our mind, the following is my Hong Kong Tel: 12345, If you have any questions on the phone can function except when whats app me.

I hope you have a chance to go to Hong Kong, we will give you a warm welcome.

I wish happiness and keep in touch.

Thank you very much (or, I am very grateful) for your dating arrangement. Because of that, I have succeeded in my proposal of marriage, allowing both of us (me and my other half) to enter into a new stage of life.

When we met (or, I saw you) last time, I noticed there were cracks and chips in the display panel of your cell phone (or, mobile phone). I think you must need a new replacement. To express our gratitude for your effort and kindness, we/I have therefore bought you a cell phone of the most popular brand and model. If you have any questions concerning the functions of the new cell phone, please feel free to contact me via Whatsapp. My phone number in Hong Kong is 12345.

We look forward to seeing you in Hong Kong. You will certainly receive (or, will certainly be treated with) our warmest welcome and hospitality throughout your stay.

I hope everything goes well with your work. Keep in touch!

With best wishes,
xxxxx

2014-06-09 00:23:55 補充：
Godfrey:
no offence

preposition after "crack" should be "in" (not "on")

2014-06-09 00:27:26 補充：
Godfrey:
no offence

"at any time" = anytime (much more simpler)

2014-06-09 00:36:43 補充：
Godfrey:
no offence

"arrangements" ... As a result of "that", (contradiction in number)

"arrangements" in plural is correctly used, so drop the word "that".

"As a result," is already sufficient


And now, you achieve 100%, congrats!

Thank you so much I am arranging to marry successful, we entered a new phase of life.


Last time I saw your cell phone display screen is broken, I'm sure you need a new cell phone, so we bought the most popular mobile phone to give you, as an expression of our own heart, my Hong Kong contact telephone numbers are as follows: 12345, if you have any questions on the phone features you can in addition to whats app when I.


I hope you have the opportunity to Hong Kong, we will certainly give you a warm welcome.


Wishing happiness, keep in touch.

Thank you very much for me to marry him success by row, so we have entered a new stage of life.

Last saw your phone screen broken, I'm sure you need a new phone, so we bought now the most popular cell phone to you to express our mind, the following is my Hong Kong Tel: 12345, If you have any questions on the phone can function except when whats app me.

I hope you have a chance to go to Hong Kong, we will give you a warm welcome.

I wish happiness and keep in touch.:)