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TomingBB's mistakes are too numerous to count. It is extremely hard to make sense of his expressions.

On arrival, I found the big school was a five-storey building.

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film (n)英 = movie (n)美, 分別不大
storey (storeys) 英
story (stories) 美

~ many mistakes in TOMING88's writing
Just name a few:
travelled by a taxi 錯, travelled by taxi 不需要 "a"
II met an accident 錯, I met with an accident

I went to Apple School to watch a film last Wednesday. I drove my
car to the school, and I arrived at the school at 10:30 am. When the
time of arriving the school, I found it was big. There were seven
stoerys(x) stories ( 樓層）of the school and there were three wide
books' rooms near the entrance of the school. I went up to the Room
405 to watch the movie. When I entered the room, it was so big, there were twenty chairs and a television with a wide screen in the room. I
started to watch the movie at 10:43am.

The movie was interesting. While I was watching the film, my mother was sleeping. I finished watching the movie at 11:50am.

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I went to Apple School to watch a movie last Wednesday. I drove my car to the
School. I arrived at the school at 10:30am. At the time of arriving
at the school, It was big, there were seven stoerys in the school and there were three thick Books near the entrance of the school. I went
to Room 405 to watch the movie. At the time of arriving at the room,
it was big, there were twenty tables and Television with a wide screen in the room. I started to watch the movie at 10:43am.

The movie was interesting. While I was watching television, my
mother was sleeping. I finished watching the movie at 11:50am.

小妹想問下以上文章既句子有無錯。



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The past continuous tense is formed by using was(were) and the present participle; used to express an action that was going on during a certain time in the past,eg:-As I was driving to the school, I met an accident.
---It is often used to indicate that an action was going on at a time when something else, more important and dramatic happened---the simple past tense; eg:-As I was walking along the school stairs, the space became bigger and bigger !
---If you want to state that two actions were going on at the same time in the past and concurrence of both of striking interest,continuous is used in both parts:-eg:-While I was watching television against surprise; my mother was sleeping on the table, the body was keeping from fallen down. (was keeping watch for fallen down.)
Error and correction:-
I went to Apple School to watch a movie last week.
I travelled by a taxi to the school.
I arrived at the school at 10:30 am.
It was a building with seven storeys (=floor- level)
The 3 books is an emblem of badge of school.
I went to Room 405 to watch the movie.
It was a big room with twenty tables&a television with a wide screen in the room.
I started to watch the (----)movie for (11:50-10:43=67 min.)(mother is irrelevant to mention something, don't just copy from text.)
The movie on (----) was interesting.
(The End)


2014-05-20 08:54:39 補充：
Thanks for allowing me to make several minor amendments-(1)travelled by taxi Or loved travelling by train.(2)I met with an accident. Pl.vote for me in HK(3)storeys=many stories from usa.(4)When the time of arrival at school=Upon arrival at sc.,I found it was big.Thanks HK