I went to Apple Garden to play TV games on 3rd February 2014. I drove my car
to the garden. I arrived at the garden at 11:30am. At the time of arriving at the
garden, it was big and there were car and bridge in the garden. There was a boat
under the bridge. I started to play them at 11:44am. The games were interesting.
While I was playing them, my sister was reading a story book. I finished playing
them at 12:50pm.
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