請教英文很厲害的達人...20點...急 !!!

你是我學習的榜樣

謝謝你讓我更堅定了夢想

並且努力想要去實踐它

我們會一直支持你

You are my role model. You help me stand firm and motivate me to realize my dream. Thank you. We always support you. (We are always by your side).

Reference:
http://www.hellouk.org/forum/index.php?showtopic=145771

You are my role model

Thank you for letting me more determined to dream

Want to practice and try it

We will always support you

---------The letter- writing20-------
Dear Miss (---),
---Please excuse my poor English standard which I am trying hard to learn.
---I am writing to thank you referring to the recent short-term study tour (in ----) knowing you are a same aged foreign female student. You have helped me a lot in the study-tour and I am very grateful to you.
---Because of the language tongue, there's no way to tell you about how much my complete appreciative thanks but by a recent writing of a letter to you.
---I want to tell you that you are my role model worthy to learn from.
---Thanks for making me more determined to achieve my dream (of quitting the beauty-care nurse position). And try to make up my mind eagerly,bringing it to practise with my action keenly.
---We will always be there as deciding factor for supporting you eagerly.(? she supporting you instead ?) before you go to another country.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
(-------)

2014-01-05 15:09:19 補充：
motivate me to realizing my dream=to achieve my dream.
you help me stand firm=make up my mind eagerly.