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I felt hot. Then I took off my coat.
I felt hot, so I took off my coat.
How can you make one simple sentence with only one main verb?
Someone came up with this. “Feeling hot, I took off my coat.”
The guy criticized harshly and tried to ….. …..
(Absolutely Chinglish -好熱呀, 除咗件衫先.)
My interpretation of his remark is as follows:
I felt hot. ~ one event
I took off my coat. ~ another event.
好熱呀 ~ 先 (先感覺好熱)
除咗件衫 ~ 後
These two events did not happen at the same time, so present-participial phrase should not be used. He considered the two events were in conflict. (~ wrong diction!)
On the other hand, suppose the two events did happen at the same time
好熱呀 ~ last for some time
除咗件衫 ~ repeated action for some time 除完一件衫又一件衫
兩件事同時間發生, 可以使用 present-participial phrase, but he also asked:
"If you take off your coat already, how can you take your coat off again????"
Well, that is my good guess (or wild guess). My imagination runs wild! I may be wrong. In reality, we don’t know what the guy is thinking.
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Feeling hot, I took off my coat.
AhShing, Ling and I all agree that this sentence is grammatically correct.
To quote a sentence from “Oxford Practice Grammar”, page 177
“Feeling cold, Harriet turned on the heating.”
Use of present-participial phrase
1. When two actions happen at the same time, we can use a present-participial phrase for one of the action.
Mary is in the kitchen making coffee. (= Mary is in the kitchen and she makes coffee.)
2. When one action happens immediately after another action, we can often use a present-participial phrase for the first action.
Taking a key out of his pocket, he opened the door.
3. We can also use a present-participial phrase to say the reason why something happens.
Feeling tired, I went to bed. (= I went to bed because I felt tired.)