兩句英文翻譯 急徵~~

it's your choice to determine the length of your life.

The length of life is that you decide.
生命長度由你決定。
The length of life is that you choose to make.
生命長度由你選擇(去製造)。

生命長度 由你決定
The length of life is your decision..

生命長度 自己選擇
The length of life is your choice.

Fantastic + 1,　其譯本，真不錯！

Mature male大師, 您的兩個動詞可能都有點小問題. No offense, just a reminder.

You decide the length of life

Length of life of their choice

The extent of life is your decision and choice.

"Your life span is up to your own decisions & choices."

這樣似乎吻合原意，也較為簡潔。

生命長度 由你決定
The length of life is determinated by yourself.

生命長度 自己選擇
The length of life is choosed by yourself.

"You are the one determine and opt for lifetime of your own."

在英文書信裡面，儘量避免重複用字。因此，「生命長度」不需要刻意重複。

如果還有問題，請繼續補充發問吧。

Life length is determined by you
Length of life of her own choice