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Good morning/Good afternoon, my name is XXX. I am 22 years old. I graduated from XXX Secondary School (in 2005).
In addition, I have obtained an associate degree(in business studies) from XXX Institution(e.g.VTC-SBI).

I held serveral clerical-work-related positions including community organizer, teaching assistant and promoter (between 2007 and 2011). Therefore, I have acquired clerical knowledge and experience, especially written abilities and skills. What I learnt at the Institution can be well applied to the clerical post I am applying for.

Questions for candidates
Which subjects did you like best at school?
Why?
Which subject are you best at?
Why?
Do you have any special hobbies or interests?
Have you taken any public exam(s)? How welll do you think you did?
How did you hear about this job?
Why do you want to do this work?
Why do you leave your position?
Ans: The only reason why I am leaving the present position is to gain more experience in a trading office.
Ans: There is no more opportunity for advancement in the company.

2011-09-07 15:42:59 補充：
written abilitities and skills ----.>writing abilities and skills

My suggestions
Good morning (afernoon/evening) , my name is XXX. you can call me XXX.
i am 22 years old. i was graduated from XXXX.
i have obtained an associtate degree of XXX.
i have experience working as a community organizer, teaching assistant and promoter. In some of these jobs Ineed to handle general clerical work.
I therefore have some knowledge of thejob as a clerk .
In addition, in my associate degree course , i learned business letter writing skills and i think it will surely be useful in the post.

In most interviews, you need to answer questions in English.
One question all interviewers ask is: Why did you leave your last job?