請求信件 英文翻譯 (急)

To the Migration Board:
Third time I come to this country has, for a unique memento of this country,Like New Zealand the country's environment, and natural scenery of ~ future plans in New Zealand continue to Shen laitishen of its own,Hope to improve their language skills, professional is hoping to learn here to here, but due to the economic situation of the family is allowed,So I am working at this year's holiday, event of a good employer, offering a work visa, I have the opportunity,Hope I can through such of opportunities, more save point money, for I future wanted to in this continues to careers do efforts, but is sorry, I I New Zealand national of legal and the on handling visa time matters, and no is full of understanding, therefore only will delays to so late only submitted file application, because in waiting company accident workers check of while, I of visa due day also is coming, because not hope therefore led illegal stay, so urge immigrants Council can to I a opportunities, can to I more some time, let I future continues to left in this learning ~
To tallest apologies hope you lenient

xxx

學任何語言不外乎就是要有恆心跟毅力

我覺得白天有工作的上班族特別適合線上學習英文

才不用下了班就急急忙忙趕著去補習班上課

光來回車程就省了1~2個小時，省下的時間可以多背好幾個單字

也可以輕鬆在家線上學英文，想學好英文的人這是一個很不錯的機會

用正確的方法一次把英文學起來!!


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What kind of language is this?

其實不需要寫這種可憐兮兮的信，因為沒人會去看。期限前趕快寄出去，甚麼信都不需要寫。

發問者: 原文不通順, 也沒有邏輯!

我強烈建議你修改一下中文再請人翻譯，你的內容很多地方語意不明。請不要說中文的意思大概是這樣。到底是不是這樣？
一個例子是「由於家裡的經濟狀況不太允許,因此本人在這一年的打工渡假內,有遇上不錯的顧主,願意提供工作簽證,讓我有這樣的機會,希望我能藉由這樣的機會,多存點錢,為我未來想在這繼續升學做努力」。容我直言，我看不懂。我想敗筆是「由於」和「因此」二詞用錯吧。
一個建議修改的方式：把草稿分段，每段寫「一個」重點就好。然後慎選標點符號，那可以訓練你把句子邏輯想清楚。
還有千萬別用一樓那位的翻譯，那很可能是翻譯機翻的，完全不通順。
如果你還願意讓在下回答這個問題，改好之後隨時歡迎寄信跟我說。
祝好運