一篇簡短的英文,請點英文高手幫我改

My name is Tom (加個姓). I am sixteen years old. Though I am a F.3 student, i am not good at english. It is not just special in my case, as the average english level of my class is not high, or you can say, english in our class atmosphere is a leackage. But i am pretty sure that, if there is some way to help us like english, such to have something more like english week, then we will have interest in english and from this, it will raisen my english level. As one of my english teacher, which i think is a great teacher, said "once you loved english, you will be good at it.". So i really hope that someone will suggest or organize some english related activities, in orer to increase our interest in english.

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i am Carrie
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i am a canadian and i think i can help u with english, if u want, i can help u to hv some tutorial class too if u want ^^
hope this can help u through english~

GoGo, if you follow the three ways - "Reading more", "Writing more" and "Listening more", your English will be improved in the future.

你可以參考以下網址
1) www.mingyuen.edu.hk/album/20030526-essay - 9k
2) Task -A competition entry ~~Hong Kong an amazing place for tourists Hong Kong is one of the world's most interesting place for tourists. Many tourists come here for

雖然寫英文首要學好寫短句子，但你的句子實在太短和太碎了，你要編排一下句子與句子之間的關係來寫，作文才會流暢通順。

My name is Tom. I am sixteen Years old. I am F.3 student. My English teacher Mrs. Ng always says your English grade will be better when you love to learn English. Even though my English learning is not too well at the present time, I need to learn English with interest. I am sure my English teacher Mrs. Ng is a great English teacher and she will be able to help me improve my English level.

你可以把手稿pm給我，但可能要隔幾天才回覆的，急的功課便不要寄望即時批閱了。