(5分)製衣 中文翻譯英文， 千其唔好用翻譯機!

1. 以下是我們曾經到訪了參展商的種類比例，大部份都主要在機械方面，其次是布料主流應用 及 輔助性的工具。

2. 下一步 ?
- 想買A的工具，是用於測量布料的厚度。
- 如果有機會的話，都希望能夠直接去探訪(參展商)的生產地，及分折各種機械對我們公司之利益。例如:
a. 能否用最少的布料，達到最佳的效果
b. 能否繁貼未來的成衣設計 與 配合未來的新發展吹勢
c. 機械的價值 vs 機器的耐用性
d. 機械的操作 vs 機器的安全性
e. 機械的生產量 vs 更換週邊機件配套的靈活性
My interpretation and translation:1) The following is a comparative sampling of the exhibitors visited. The majority showcased their machinery components, followed by mainstream fabric applications and supplementary tools. 2) The next step?- To consider purchase of A’s machinery for fabric thickness evaluation- Given the opportunity, visit the exhibitor’s factory/outfit and analyze the viability of the various machines. For example:a. whether optimal results can be achieved with minimal fabric usageb. adaptability for changes in ready-made designs and for future trends and developmentsc. machinery pricing vs durabilityd. machinery operation vs safetye machinery productivity vs component and peripheral flexibility

judy: 001回答者是使用網上軟譯體譯的,英文語法錯漏百出.
002回答者的譯本: 第一句譯得" 強差原意". The following is a comparative sampling(種類比例?) of the exhibitors visited(This is a run-on sentence.)

2011-06-06 17:29:35 補充：
此外, 還有用詞不當, 例如: A's machinery(A的工具?) , evaluation( 測量?), viability(利益?), machinery components(是解作機械零部件, 而并不是機械設備)

1. The following was we had once visited exhibitor's type proportion, the major part mainly in the mechanical aspect, next was the cotton material mainstream application and the auxiliary tool. 2. Next step? - wants to buy The tool, is uses in surveying the cotton material thickness. - if has opportunity, hoped can visit (exhibitor) directly yieldly, and minute booklet each kind of machinery to benefit of our company. For example: a. Whether to use the least cotton materials, achieves best effect b. Whether numerous to paste future ready-made clothing design and the coordinate future recent development blows potential c. Mechanical value vs machine's durable d. Mechanical operation vs machine's secure e. Mechanical productivity vs replaces the peripheral part necessary flexibility


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kwun hin

2011-06-06 11:13:55 補充：
1. The following was we had once visited exhibitor's type proportion, the major part mainly in the mechanical aspect, next was the cotton material mainstream application and the auxiliary tool.

2011-06-06 11:14:21 補充：
2. Next step? - wants to buy The tool, is uses in surveying the cotton material thickness. - if has opportunity, hoped can visit (exhibitor) directly yieldly, and minute booklet each kind of machinery to benefit of our company. For example:

2011-06-06 11:14:33 補充：
a. Whether to use the least cotton materials, achieves best effect
b. Whether numerous to paste future ready-made clothing design and the coordinate future recent development blows potential

2011-06-06 11:14:39 補充：
c. Mechanical value vs machine's durable
d. Mechanical operation vs machine's secure
e. Mechanical productivity vs replaces the peripheral part necessary flexibility

Below are the percentages of the exhibitor categories we visited: