英文問題 睇下呢句句子有冇錯

我覺得自己會 => I feel I will... ; I think I will... ; 肯定小小的說法: I am interested in...
areas => area
商業領域 =/= business services ; => commercial field

For examples:
I feel I will develop my career in commercial area in the future.
I am interested in developing my career in commercial field.

AesopnA,

Your sentence is correct except that "I" should be capitalized.

I think I will develop in the area of business as my career in the future.

希望幫到你~~