Dear:
Do you know ? the moment you got in to the plane ,my husbands LEXUS car just be storen ,the man into the factory take out the momey and key ran away immediately ,even though there are some workers in my factory ,How dar they are ,those bullet have been waiting outside for hours,no one can help us aspecially in the countryside hope it won't hoppen again.talk later,
幫我看看我的英文信有没有錯
2011-02-23 4:32 pm
回答 (4)
2011-02-23 8:13 pm
✔ 最佳答案
讓我來試一試破解這封信吧!Dear,
Do you know? The moment you got into the plane, my husband's Lexus
car was stolen. The man who slipped into the factory took away the money
and the key, and ran away immediately even though there were some workers
around. How daring there were! Those bullets(?) have been waiting outside
for hours, but no one can help us especially in the countryside. Hope it
won't happen again. Talk later.
希望有幫上忙!
參考: 英語的表達首重語感.
2011-02-23 7:57 pm
其他地方大概可以看出要講的意思, 不過你中間講的一個 bullet 是要表示什麼?
結果是搶案不是被偷嗎? 還是兩件不同的事?
還是只是想講 bandit 之類?
countryside 應該只是想講那邊很偏僻?
2011-02-23 11:59:08 補充：
就原發問 "有沒有錯" 的話
答案是: 有錯, 且錯得很離譜
結果是搶案不是被偷嗎? 還是兩件不同的事?
還是只是想講 bandit 之類?
countryside 應該只是想講那邊很偏僻?
2011-02-23 11:59:08 補充：
就原發問 "有沒有錯" 的話
答案是: 有錯, 且錯得很離譜
2011-02-23 7:51 pm
看不懂?!?
請打中文 更容易幫你改正
2011-02-23 15:46:33 補充：
Dear,
Do you know the moment you got onto the plane my husband's Lexus just got stolen? Even though there were some workers, the man still broke into my factory and took the money and keys then ran away immediately. How dare they were!
2011-02-23 15:46:41 補充：
Those bullies had been waiting outside for hours, no one could help us, especially my factory is in the countryside. Hope it won't happen again. Talk to you later.
請打中文 更容易幫你改正
2011-02-23 15:46:33 補充：
Dear,
Do you know the moment you got onto the plane my husband's Lexus just got stolen? Even though there were some workers, the man still broke into my factory and took the money and keys then ran away immediately. How dare they were!
2011-02-23 15:46:41 補充：
Those bullies had been waiting outside for hours, no one could help us, especially my factory is in the countryside. Hope it won't happen again. Talk to you later.
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