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B: ... . Have you any idea of dressing for the wedding party?
A: It's the first time I attend (出席)my friend's wedding. I don't know what color of the dress is good for(適合) this occasion(埸合)? Karen, could you give me any suggestions?
B: I think you can put on (穿著)any color dress you like. Before choosing the style, you'd better think of your favourite color.
A: I don't care the dress color, but I want to put on a decollete dress/v-cut dress,which goes with(適合) girls with rounded figure (豐滿的身材) according to most people's opinions.
B: Okay. Sally, you can try this blue dress made in France , so its workmanship may be better. It is made of silk featuring softness and comfort. On its top and back come with butterfly pattern respectively besides some hearted design in red and purple.(此是倒裝句法Inversion)
A: This style is nice but I think it's too colorful.
B: I also think that dressing in black, you look more slim and pretty. Let me ask the salesperson whether the black style is available.
A: I think it is necessary for me to buy a crystal brooch and a beautify silver necklace to match this dress.
B: Oh! That's extremely perfect. I found we look like twin sister, one dressing in white, the other in black. It's an interesting thing/ It's very funny.
A: I think we may be the most attracyive because of our dressing in sharp contrast.

2010-11-13 15:04:10 補充：
typing mistake: attracyive -----> attractive

2010-11-13 17:37:24 補充：
correction : On its top and back come with ... ......> On its top and back come with a butterfy pattern as well as some hearted designs in red or purple respectively.

2010-11-13 19:25:54 補充：
Comments : (1) Do you have any idea to wear to join the wedding?(Ching)
(2) I don't know which color is more suitable to wear.(grammatical mistake)
Usage of "which" : e.g. Which color would you like,blue or red? Which shoes whall I wear, the black ones or the brown ones?

2010-11-13 19:57:30 補充：
(4) "to be made from" : to be out of e.g. Bread is made from flour and water.
"to be made of" : to be formed of a particular substance, e.g. This table is made of old wooden crates. These toys are made of alloys.

2010-11-13 20:15:00 補充：
(5) Usage of "wear(vt)" : e.g. He is wearing his shoes/his tie/a mask/his specticles. (6) You wear(vt) a black dress can be look(v) more slim and pretty.(There are two verbs in a sentence)

--that is how i will say in English, sounds more normal and everyday conversation to me. Trust me, i am so good at this now since i speak English everyday at school (i study in Canada, who will underdstand me if i speak in Chinese?) for 5 years and with experiences i became fluent speaking English

B: what about you? You can also be the attractive one. Do you have any idea what to wear for the wedding?---that is how i will say in English, sounds more normal and everyday conversation to me那怎你呢? 你也可以成為吸引的那一個,你有沒有任何想法去穿著去參加婚禮?A: this is my first time to be invited (join is not a right word here, we don't say join party but you can say join a group, band, club, it sounds awkward here) my friend’s wedding, and I don’t know which color is more suitable to wear (dress up is werid you use here because dress mean 打扮成). Karen, could you give me any suggestion?/Any comment ?這是我第一次去參加我朋友的婚禮,和我不知道那一种顏色是適合去穿,Karen,你可不可以給我一些意見?B: In fac,t you can wear any color dress you like. You can think about which color is you favorite before you choose the style.事實上,你可以穿任何的顏色你喜歡的,你可以想一想你最喜愛的顏色在你選擇款式之前.A:I don’t care the color of the dress. but I want to have a (露肩的裙) because people say that the rounded girl is suitable to wear this kind of dress.我不介意顏色,但我想有一件露肩的裙因為人們說豐滿的女孩適合穿這一种類型的裙B: okay. Sally, you can try this blue dress. it is made in France so the workmanship of this dress will be better. It is also made from silk and therefor it is soft and comfortable to wear. There is a butterfly on the top of the dress, on the back of the dress, there is some red and purple heart on it.好的, Sally,你可以嘗試一下這件藍色的裙子,它是來自法國的所以手工會較好,它也是用絲綢做的,它是柔軟和舒適去穿下,這裡有一個蝴蝶在上面,在後面,有一些紅色和紫色的心A: the style is fine but I think it is too colorful.這個款式不錯但是我想太花巧了B:I also think you look more slim and pretty in a black dress. Let me ask the sale if they have this style in black.我也覺得你穿黑色會瘦一點,讓我去問售貨員這個款有沒有黑色A: I have an idea. I can buy a crystal brooch and a beautiful silver necklace to blend with.我可以買一個水晶胸針和一個美麗的銀項鍊去配合他

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B: oh! This is extremely prefect. And I found a very interesting thing ; we are like twins, I am dressed in white and you a dressed in black.

呀,這真是太完美了,我發現一件有趣的事是我們好像一個組合,我穿白色和你穿黑色情
A: I think we may be the most attractive people in the (place) because what we wear are a sharp contrast