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Good afternoon sirs, my name is Lee, Sam Lee. I am from ABC College, I always spend my spare time in reading science fiction, It is because there are many interesting things inside science fiction, such as Issac Asimoy's ~ The Gods Themselves revolves around "the strong nuclear force" , beside this the hard fiction, there are many others stories science fiction such as the "Star Wars" this was a wonderful film I had never seen before. I like science fiction very much it can extend my knowledge unlimited.

On the other hand many authors have added some real elements and features in thier novels, such as Jin Yong he always mix up real history inside his novels it makes readers easy to read.

At last, some novels create a future by assuming some different turning
points, such as the Axis Countries in the second World War assume to won but in vain. I really concerned about it. Thank you!

2010-10-04 11:20:36 補充：
尾應該．．．such as the Axis Countries in the second World War assume to won but in vain otherwise we wonder what would happen to the world today.. I am really concerned about it. Thank you!

Good afternoon, everybody. My name is Sam. During my free time, I spend much time reading some science fiction novels.Why do I enjoy this kind of fiction? It is because a lot of things in the fictional world not only interest me but also provide me with a huge space for creating my own world endlessly.

Many authors like Gen Yung have added some elemets and features to their novels as story's background in the old time of China , which may not be true in the history . These novels are popular with readers. Moverover, some novels create a future by assuming different turning points. For example, we suppose that the axis didn't lose in the Second World War, what will happen?(此句原意難猜測) I really concern about it. Thank you!


2010-10-07 10:12:19 補充：
correction : I really concern about it. ------> I am really concerned about it.

Good afternoon, everyone! My name is Sam. In my free time (or spare time), I like reading some scientific novels. You might ask why would I enjoy it so much? It is because there are a lot of interesting scenes inside the fictional world. Also, it provides me with a huge space to create a world of my imagination without any limitation. Many writers will add some mystical elements into the history. For example, Jin Yong －one of the famous Kung Fu novel authors. He made up his story background from ancient imperial China. Historical figures often intermingle with fictional ones. It is easy to identify the figures and the novels are immensely entertaining because we are familiar with the Chinese history. Moreover, a future is created in many of the novels by assuming some different turning points in history. For example, if the Axis powers were not defeated in the Second World War, we wonder what would happen to the world? I am really concerned about it. Thank you!

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