請指出錯處!!!

2010-09-17 5:17 am
請指出錯處!!!
My family is not very rich, but we live happily together.

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回答 (7)

2010-09-17 6:15 am
✔ 最佳答案
My family is not very rich, but we (happily) live together.

My family is not very rich, but we live together (happily).
2010-09-17 11:26 pm
My family is not very rich, but we live happily together.[wrong]
代名詞 “we” 在這裡未定義的。它可以是 ”您和我” 或 ”任何人和我”…。

可以改成
(1)My family members are not very rich, but we live happily together.

(2)My family is not very rich, but my family members live happily together.
2010-09-17 3:40 pm
我認同意見者003 mwl_r 的意見。
「我認同答題者002 KwanTungyan的答案。」
『其實我想話lei,你e到係冇錯處lor!-.- 』
2010-09-17 9:16 am
我認同答題者002 KwanTungyan的答案。
2010-09-17 5:42 am
我覺得應該系:

My family are not very rich but we live happily.

因為we已經表示My family的意思,唔洗用together,

而且but前面唔可以有[,],唔系的話,就要用Although=雖然; 儘管,

變成:

Although my family are not very rich,we live happily.
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2010-09-17 5:35 am
其實我想話lei,你e到係冇錯處lor!-.-
2010-09-17 5:19 am
is not very rich 可以用are poor
並唔係錯處


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