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2010-09-01 3:17 am

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Dear Sirs,

In accordance with our verification and modification of the commission for
the month of June10, which amount is $1,000.00.The following details are the payment status:

1) $500.00 Receipt sent by email to notify you on 15 June 10.

2) $500.00 Attached is a bank deposit slip for balance amount of July's commission as well as a detailed breakdown of the commission.

Should you have any queries, please contact us.
Thank you.

Best Regards,
Accounts Department

回答 (1)

用戶19288

2010-09-01 5:00 am

✔ 最佳答案

We would like to inform you that the commission of June 2010 should be $1,000.00 according to our verification and adjustment . Below are the delailed commissions we have paid to you :

1) On 15 June 2010 we notified you of the paid commisssion $500.00 by email.
2) Attached is a bank deposit slip amounting to $500.00 for balance of July's commission, which detailed its breakdowns.

Should you have any queries, please contract us. Thank you for your attention.

Best regards,

Miss/Mr.XXXXX
Accounts Department

2010-09-01 07:33:10 補充：
typing mistake : contract ------> contact

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