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In recent years, a lot of great disasters have happened. I feel sorry for the tragedies as I know many people were have been killed or had been missing in those natural disasters. The natural disasters are bad news for everyone because they are so destructive and powerful that everything can be destroyed in a minute.

Also, I realize that humans are very fragile and helpless under the natural disasters because life is beyond our control. In this disaster these disasters, a lot of people have lost their homes and families, hence I understand that life is short and unpredictable. Therefore, we should treasure and appreciate what we own.

If we want to prevent those disasters in the future, I think the government should establish several laws to against restricting restrict deforestation.Thus,it can stop the people from cutting trees anymore. However, I think the most effective way is to promote public’s awareness for environmental protection because everyone have responsibilities has the responsibility to protect our planet.

wendy2003hk2003：

In recent years, a large number of disasters have happened. I feel sorry for
such tragedies as there were many people killed and missing in those
natural disasters. The natural disasters are bad news for everyone because
they are so overwhelmingly destructive that everything can be destroyed
within minutes.
I also realize humans are so vulnerable and helpless beyond our control in such natural disasters. A lot of people lost thier homes and families , I hence understand that life is short and unpredictable; we therefore should
treasure and appreciate everything that we own at present.
In order to prevent these disasters to happen in the future, I should think
the country concerned must enact more rules of law to strengthen the
regulation and punishment for deforestation so as to discourage people
from cutting down trees arbitrarily anymore. However, I believe the most
effevtive way is to awaken the general public's awareness and sense of
environmental protction that everyone has the responsibility to protect our
planet.

In recent years, a lot of great disasters have happened. I feel sorry for the tragedies as I know many people were killed or missed in those natural disasters. The natural disasters are bad news to everyone because they are so destructive and powerful that everything can be destroyed in a minute.


Also, I realized that humans are very fragile and helpless under the natural disasters since life is beyond our control. In those disaster, many people lost their homes and families. Hence, I understand that life is short and unpredictable. We should treasure and appreciate what we own.


If we want to prevent those disasters in the future, I think the government should establish several laws to restrict deforestation.It can stop people from cutting trees anymore. However, I think the most effective way is to promote public's awareness of environmental protection because everyone have responsibility to protect our planet.

Hope that you find it useful.