Grammar Checking 6

Good work !!


In recent years, a lot of great disasters continue to happen have happened. I feel sorry for the tragedy tragedies as I know many people are were dead or missing in those natural disasters. I think the natural disasters are the bad news for everyone because they are so destructive and powerful that they can destroy everything in a minute.


Also, I found that humans are very fragile and slight helpless under the natural disasters because no one have choices to be alive or dead can control his own life. (Try this: because life is beyond our control) Moreover, I understand life is short and unpredictable, so that we should treasure and appreciate what we own.


If we want to prevent those disasters in the future, the government should establish laws for restricting deforestation. However, I think the most effective way is to promote public’s awareness of environmental protection.

2010-08-18 04:19:54 補充：
I find that

not

I found that

Over the recent years, a lot of serious disasters has continue to happen. I feel sorry for these tragedies, as I knew many people were killed or had been missing in those natural disasters. I think a natural disaster is a bad news for everyone because it is destructive and powerful that everything can be destroyed in a minute.

Also, I realized that human were so fragile and slight under a natural disaster because no one could have choose to live or die. Moreover, I understand that life is short and unpredictable, so we should be treasured and be appreciated of what we have owned.

If we could prevent those disasters in the future, the government should established laws to against restricting deforestation. However, I think the most effective way is to promote public’s awareness for environmental protection.