1.這三句英文句子，那句較好？
2.犯了甚麼毛病？
1. I'm planing a eastern europe trip in september to december 2011 with great enthusiasm.
2. I'm writing my travel plan with great enthusiasm for september to december 2011 europe trip .
3.I'm enthusiastically planing a eastern europe trip in september to december 2011 .
這三句英文句子，那句較好？犯了甚麼毛病？
2010-07-18 10:35 pm
回答 (6)
2010-07-19 8:23 pm
✔ 最佳答案
1. I'm planning a trip to Eastern Europe with great enthusiasm/in great detail, which is from September to December 2011.2. I'm writing/making my travel plan with great enthusiasm/in great detail for visiting Eastern Europe from September to December 2011.
3. I'm enthusiastically planning an Eastern Europe trip from September to December 2011/between September and December 2011.
2010-07-24 10:48 pm
2010-07-19 1:29 am
To: 003 Wong Tak Yee,
'Writing a travel plan' is correct English. Please read the link below.
http://www.cornwall.gov.uk/default.aspx?page=14872
'Writing a travel plan' is correct English. Please read the link below.
http://www.cornwall.gov.uk/default.aspx?page=14872
2010-07-18 11:52 pm
1.第３句應是最好 但其實３句都有錯．
2.
1) 應改成：I'm planning for a trip to Eastern Europe from September to Decemb er in 2011 with great enthusiasm (or passion).
2) 應改成：這句的verb 不應是'write' 所以這句也不知怎改．
3) 應改成：I'm enthusiastically(or passionately) planning for a trip to Eastern Europe from September to Decemb er in 2011.
:D
2.
1) 應改成：I'm planning for a trip to Eastern Europe from September to Decemb er in 2011 with great enthusiasm (or passion).
2) 應改成：這句的verb 不應是'write' 所以這句也不知怎改．
3) 應改成：I'm enthusiastically(or passionately) planning for a trip to Eastern Europe from September to Decemb er in 2011.
:D
2010-07-18 11:24 pm
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