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這是一則my favourite fruit (喜歡的水果)英文介紹


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原文:
我喜歡的水果是西瓜,在台灣主要的產地是在中南部,西瓜有黃的和紅的!我比較喜歡紅的,因為紅的西瓜比較甜.西瓜嘗起來像冰沙,因為它水份很多,在夏天吃很清涼.當然西瓜汁我也很喜歡~

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My favorite fruit is watermelon. Watermelons are mainly produced in the central and southern part of Taiwan. There are yellow and red watermelons. I like the red ones better, because they are usually sweeter. Watermelon sometimes tastes like smoothie (冰沙), because it's very watery. Eating watermelon cools you down during summer. Of course, I like watermelon juice as well.