A sentence in one of my answers go like this:
No mention of fattening or relation between ice cubes and getting fat.
(http://hk.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?qid=7010061400599)
I received a response (Again!) on my writing.
意見者: GarlicDog ( 小學級 5 級 )
發表時間: 2010-06-25 11:43:22
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No mention of TOO FORMAL
Is it from your dictionaries?
getting fat ORAL ENGLISH
WRITTEN ENGLISH + ORAL ENGLISH IN ONE SIMPLE SENTENCE
PHEWWWWWWWWWW
YOU ARE THE DOG, MAN!
意見者: GarlicDog ( 小學級 5 級 )
發表時間: 2010-06-25 11:45:02
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USE " WEIGHT GAIN", RETARDED MORON!
Basically, what the guy wants to say is "No mention" is formal English and "getting fat" is used in oral English. Formal and oral expressions should not go together in one sentence.
I have two questions.
1. Is "no mention of something" a formal and "getting fat" an oral expression? It indeed they are, how do we distinguish formal from oral usage patterns?
2. Is using formal and oral expressions in one sentence considered bad, if so, how bad?