中文翻譯英文 見工用 唔該唔該(急)

My try: (any corrections welcome)

First of all, thank you for reading my resume.....I have 3 years of experience in sales, and through which I developed an interest in visual merchandising.....my decision of this career change is not an impulsive one, as I have thought over it for half a year before I decided to study in relevant course(s).....In the process of my study I am convinced that my choice is absolutely correct. I see visual merchandising as my life-long career. Now that I have completed the relevant course, I am studying computer knowledge, and I am prepared to keep enriching myself with knowledge in the hope of better equipping myself.....I wish you can kindly give me an interview so that I can answer in person any questions you may have.

我會努力工作及更加進步 I shall work hard and improve myself. (OR: I am hardworking and I always look for improvements. 这突显你一直以来的工作态度)

My interests are in sports and designs: fashion design as well as visual designs. That is why everywhere I go I enjoy looking out for all things to do with designs.

Good luck & happy learning!

2010-06-27 12:49:59 補充：
My pleasure.

"Should I be given the opportunity to work in your company, I promise I shall work hard and improve myself in order to become a dependable member of the company."

Application letter is vital to impress the co, do also prepare well for the interview should you be asked to attend one.

2010-06-27 12:55:57 補充：
How about putting appended paragraph after your request for an interview?

2010-06-28 16:08:58 補充：
"....., I promise I WOULD work hard and improve myself....."
sorry for the mistake (sequence of tense).

Good morning/ Good afternoon, everyone. First of all, thank you for giving me an interview/ I am glad to be here for this interview.

I have been engaging in the sector of sales service for three years . With my strong interest in visual merchandising, I have decided to turn to this kind of job . That's not an impetuous decision because I have taken 6- month consideration before studying relevant course / program to meet the job requirements.

During my studies, I am sure that my decision to choose visual merchandising as my life-long career is absolutely right . Besides completing the afore-said course / program , I have been studying computer course /program for self-enhancement .

In addition, my hobbies include sports, fashion design and visual design .

I sincerely hope that I could be granted a chance of serving your company.

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Thank you to read my resume .... I have been in sales for 3 years .... and because in the beginning through the sales generated on the Visual merchandising .... and decided to become interested in the decision is not impulsive .. because I have thought for half a year for a long time before deciding to enroll in relevant courses ..... and taking their own direction during the more certain, more sure their own choice ... I also see nothing wrong will Visual merchandising is to pursue a career , although the study completed the course ... but I am now also learning about computer knowledge, but I hope the equipment will continue to study their own ... So .. want your company to give an interview ... I'll work hard and Thanks even more progress



In addition, under Chung would like to ask me if I want to talk about .... interest line: All the time lines set i like .. Zhongyi Street closer look at a different point of Visual Design and Dynamic English speaking ah

First of all, thank you for reading my resume. I have been working in sales for three years. During my work, I have developed an interest in visual merchandising. My decision of my career change is not on impulse. I had thought about it for half a year before I decided to study the relevant courses. In the course of my studies, I am convinced that my choice is absolutely correct. I see visual merchandising as my life-time career. Recently, I have completed the relevant courses. Now, I am studying relative computer courses in order to enrich my computer knowledge. I am prepared to keep studying in order to equip myself with better knowledge.

I hope you could consider my application and grant me an interview at your earliest convenience so that I can answer any questions you may have.


My interests are in sports and designs: fashion designs and visual designs. That is why wherever I go, I enjoy looking around for anything to do with designs.

First of all, I would like to thank your company for reading my curriculum vitae .... I engaged in sales for 3 years now and because of it, I am into Visual merchandising . My decision of this career change is not an impulsive decision .I have been thinking about it for half a year long before deciding to attend relevant courses. I've made up my mind that I want to define Visual Merchandising as my life career. although studies leading to a complete course ... but I have to pursue further studies for computer knowledge, but I will pursue .. Want to yourself ... so hope you give an interview opportunity ... I'll try to work and have made thank you


My interest in departments: all relevant set are nice .. Nice line Street, keep up the different Visual design and motion speak English points?

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u need to work on your writing skill in chinese also. you can't write like you are talking. i think it needs a little touch up.
may be you can dl a cover letter template off the internet on vm

Thank you to read my resume .... I have been in sales for 3 years .... and because in the beginning through the sales generated on the Visual merchandising .... and decided to become interested in the decision is not impulsive .. because I have thought for half a year for a long time before deciding to enroll in relevant courses ..... and taking the direction of their own during the more certain, more sure nothing wrong with their own choice ... I will also see Visual merchandising is to pursue a career , although the study completed the course ... but I am now also learning about computer knowledge, but I hope the equipment will continue to study their own ... So .. want your company to give an interview ... I'll work hard and Thank you even more progress



In addition, under Chung would like to ask me if I want to talk about .... interest line: All the time lines set i like .. Zhongyi Street closer look at a different point of Visual Design and Dynamic English speaking ah

thank you so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wugai we help super appreciated!