1. 冇「xxxx was happened」呢樣野，只有「xxxx happened」
2. 「while a green signal is displayed on a traffic light」應寫為「while the green traffic light was on」，或者「while the traffic light was green」就可以了
3. 「driving toward(s) the old woman」就可以了，就算要加「direction」，都要跟「to」而非「of」。另外，建議「great speed」寫作「high speed」
4. 建議將「She was hurt」寫成「She was injured」或「she was wounded」
5. 「The pedestrians were looking and worrying about her」，「look」住一件野時個「look」一定要跟「at」
整體來說都technically correct，但強烈建議大家多看英文報紙......
==關於發問者==
1. 「inebriated」的用法係「inebriated xxxx」而非「xxxx is inebriated」，例如醉架係「inebriated driving」，醉架司機係「inebriated driver」
《評論》英文改正文章 15點 幫幫手呀
2010-05-28 11:10 am
回答 (2)
2010-05-31 6:47 pm
garlic2010: 你好犀利 ！
2010-05-28 12:21 pm
After 15 MINUTES, AMBULENCE AND POLIEMEN ARRIVED.
After 15 MINUTES, an AMBULENCE AND (the) POLIEMEN ARRIVED.
2010-05-28 04:22:21 補充：
IT TOOK ABOUT 30 MINS TO GET THE ROAD TO CLEAR.
IT TOOK ABOUT 30 minutes TO GET THE ROAD cleared.
2010-05-28 04:24:20 補充：
THE POLICEMEN GAVE HIM A ALCOHOLIC TEST
THE POLICEMEN GAVE HIM an alcohol TEST
2010-05-28 04:24:51 補充：
AND SENT HIM BACK TO THE STATION.
AND SENT HIM TO THE STATION.
2010-05-28 04:31:36 補充：
There was a car DRIVING TOWARD THE DIRECTION OF THE OLD WOMAN AT A GREAT SPEED.
Strictly speaking, a car does not drive itself. "A great speed" is okay but is better without the article.
There was a car approaching THE OLD WOMAN at great speed.
2010-05-28 04:37:53 補充：
The PEDESTRIANS (行人) WERE LOOKING AND WORRYING ABOUT HER.
This sentence is correct because 唔係「look」住一件野.
The pedestrians were looking = looking around.
After 15 MINUTES, an AMBULENCE AND (the) POLIEMEN ARRIVED.
2010-05-28 04:22:21 補充：
IT TOOK ABOUT 30 MINS TO GET THE ROAD TO CLEAR.
IT TOOK ABOUT 30 minutes TO GET THE ROAD cleared.
2010-05-28 04:24:20 補充：
THE POLICEMEN GAVE HIM A ALCOHOLIC TEST
THE POLICEMEN GAVE HIM an alcohol TEST
2010-05-28 04:24:51 補充：
AND SENT HIM BACK TO THE STATION.
AND SENT HIM TO THE STATION.
2010-05-28 04:31:36 補充：
There was a car DRIVING TOWARD THE DIRECTION OF THE OLD WOMAN AT A GREAT SPEED.
Strictly speaking, a car does not drive itself. "A great speed" is okay but is better without the article.
There was a car approaching THE OLD WOMAN at great speed.
2010-05-28 04:37:53 補充：
The PEDESTRIANS (行人) WERE LOOKING AND WORRYING ABOUT HER.
This sentence is correct because 唔係「look」住一件野.
The pedestrians were looking = looking around.
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