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2010-05-19 4:39 am
my mobile phone(presentation)
Good morning ,everyone.Nowdays,mobile phone are popular and important for us to keep contect.If not that ,we're inconvenient for our daily life .Such as we had occur accident, but we don't immediately to call 999.So,we must had our mobile phone .Therefore,,let me talk my mobile phone .

my mobile phone is Sony Ericsson,k660i.I bought this brand because it has 3G functions,I can make video call to my friend or family. Also it color are green
and white ,i like this colors so much.This phone was no expensive ,it is about $2,000 dollars.but (我想5到,請幫下我想想).

This phone is very attractive because the button is so special,it is circle ,it look likes pearls.Moreover,the keyboard is little,so i think suitable for girls to use .Also ,I would like decorate with my mobile phone,i think make it more beautiful.

The phone is very useful because it has a lot of media.Such as can take the photos ,listen to music ,watch the videos .In addition,you can mark down some important events on the wallpaper to remind you .

In conclusion,the mobile phone is so useful .Therefore ,we should cherish our mobile phone

回答 (3)

2010-05-20 6:05 am
✔ 最佳答案
Good morning, everyone. Nowadays, mobile phones are getting popular and important. They help us keep contact with people. If there are no mobile phones, our lives will be inconvenient . For example, when accidents happen, we cannot call the police if we do not have a mobile phone. Therefore, it is better for us to have a mobile phone. Let me introduce my mobile phone to all of you .

The model of my mobile phone is K660i of Sony Ericsson. I bought this phone because I can make video calls to my friends or families via 3G network. I also like the green and white colour too. Although the phone was not expensive, (...自己諗啦...)

This phone is very attractive because the round buttons are so special that it looks like pearls. Moreover, the keyboard is suitable for girls because of its small size. Also, I would like to decorate my mobile phone with some stickers to make the phone more beautiful.

The phone is very useful because it contains a lot of media, such as taking photos, listening to music and watching videos. In addition, you can jot down some important events and the phone will remind you regularly.

To conclude, mobile phones are so useful, and we should cherish our own mobile phones and avoid changing mobile phones frequently.
2010-05-19 3:26 pm
David wrote
IT LETS ME TO make video callS

Never, never put TO after LET.
2010-05-19 9:24 am
my mobile phone(presentation)
Good morning, everyone. NowAdays,mobile phone GETTING popular BECAUSE IT IS important for us to keep contAct WITH. WITHOUT IT, IT IS VERY inconvenient TO our daily LIVES. FOR EXAMPLE, IF we haVE accidentS, we NEED TO MAKE A call TO 999 IMMEDIATELY. So, mobile phone IS REALLY IMPORTANT.

THE mobile phone I AM USING NOW is THE Sony Ericsson, k660i. I bought this PHONE because it has A 3G function. IT LETS ME TO make video callS to my friendS or family MEMBERS. THE PHONE IS IN MY FAVORITE COLORS OF green and white. THE PRICE OF THE phone WAS QUITE REASONABLE AT about $2,000 dollars. (我完全唔知你仲想講乜, 你要講埋先得架...唔可以同你作埋.)
This phone is very attractive because the KEYS ARE IN CIURCULAR PATTERNS. It lookS like pearls. The keyPAD IS QUITE SMALL, so iT IS MORE suitable for girls to use. Also, I would like TO decorate my mobile phone TO BE MORE beautiful AND ATTRACTIVE.

The phone is very USER'S FRIENDLY because it has a lot of FUNCTIONS. Such as, A BUILT IN CAMERA, A MP3 PLAYER, AND A SPECIAL FUNCTION, WHICH you can mark down some important events on the wallpaper as a reminder.

In conclusion, mobile phone IS VERY useful INDEED. Therefore, YOU should cherish YOUR mobile phone.

2010-05-19 01:28:33 補充:
更正:

Good morning, everyone. NowAdays,mobile phone IS GETTING popular BECAUSE IT IS important for us to keep contAct WITH.

2010-05-19 16:26:44 補充:
更正呢句: IT LETS ME TO make video callS to my friendS or family MEMBERS.

I can make video calls to my friends and family members with the 3G function.


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