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2010-05-14 6:59 am
Why do me introduce it ?
Firstly, there is no car. It is suitable for family to go .
Secondly, there are many different events activity for you to play.
The thirdly, you must not bring anything go there.
At the end I’ d be very happy to answer any of your questions.

Cheung Chau is one of the most popular of all the outlying islands in Hong Kong . We can easy to ride the ferry people to and from Cheung Chau about an hour from central. Firstly, there is no car therefore it is suitable for family to go. Secondly, we can enjoy that adventure tourney along the path of coast. Cheung Chau also is where the local pirate Cheung Po Tsai hid there before So, it is famous for people to visit the Cheung Po Tsai cave. And we can ride bicycle around the island. The Tung Wan beach is also famous for swimming. It is a sea bathing paradise. Such that we can fishing at other side of the Tung Wan and on the shore. The Pak Tai birthday is in this month. The Bun Festival is coming soon. We can see the a unique and colourful street procession which can see the celebration of weeklong. The waterfront restaurant serves good seafood where strong fishing. You can taste them for anytime. The important thing is, there have many things in live. You must not bring anything and any food to there. It is enough for your want. Now let’s loot at the pictures.

Finally, everybody. Let me remind you of some of the issues. Family is very important. We have work in all days. We need enjoy the family gathering, sometimes we must go to relax . Somebody may always go outing of HK for travel. Except Cheung Chau, do you know HK has many places is better than other country? For example : Tung Ping Chau , Po Toi Island, that is the good place for picnic ! In this time, you may think over HK also has many places to go. Thank you for your attention. Have you any questions?

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2010-05-14 12:23 pm
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Why do I introduce it ?

Firstly, there is no traffic which is suitable for the entire family to go .

Secondly, there are many different events or activities for you to enjoy.

Thirdly, you must not bring anything to go there.

At the end I’ d be more than happy to answer your questions.

Cheung Chau is one of the most popular outlying islands in Hong Kong . We can get there easily by riding the ferry. It takes an hour to reach Cheung Chau from the Central District. Firstly, there is no traffic, therefore it is suitable for the entire family to go. Secondly, we can enjoy that adventure journey along the coastline. Cheung Chau also was the place that Cheung Po Tsai who was a local pirate used to hang out.
We can ride the bicycle around the island. The Tung Wan beach is famous for swimming which is also a sea bathing paradise. We can go fishing at the other side of Tung Wan and on the shore. The Pak Tai birthday is in this month, and the Bun Festival is coming soon. We can see the unique and colourful street which celebrates the festivals for the whole week. The waterfront restaurant serves good seafood since they are so fresh. You can taste them at anytime. The important thing is, there have many live things. You are not allowed to bring any food in there. I had done enough introduction already, now let’s take a look at the pictures.

Finally, I would like to remind you of some of the issues. Family is very important to all of us. We have to work almost everyday. We need to enjoy the family gathering, sometimes we must go to the countryside to relax . Some people may go for an outing of HK for their travelling leisure. Except Cheung Chau, do you know HK has many places which are better than other countries? For example : Tung Ping Chau and Po Toi Island are excellent choices for picnic ! At this time, you may think over HK also has so many attractions. Thank you for your attention. Does anybody have any questions?
2010-05-15 6:25 pm
Thank a lot!
2010-05-15 7:11 am
發問者: Why do I introduce it?
Firstly, it is suitable for the entire family to go there because there is no land traffice. Secondly, there are a lot of outdoor activities for pleasure or fun or sporting purpose. At the end I would be very happy to answer your questions.

2010-05-14 23:13:13 補充:
Typing mistake : traffice ------> traffic
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