《評論》grammar checking

Mistakes in the selected answer.

Suddenly, the things around me changed into darkNESS!
Suddenly, the things around me turned into darkness!


I heard the sound of water flowING from all directions INTO THE CAR.
I heard the sound of water from all directions.
(sound does not flow. The text did not mention "into the car".)


I WAS PANIC.
I panicked.


THE power OF THE LIGHTS gradually restorED.
The power gradually came back.
(The text did not mention "power of the lights".)


I FELT DIFFICULT TO BREATHE.
I felt it difficult to breathe.
I have difficulty breathing.
(The text "My breathing became very difficult" was better.)


I was able to breathe in the water! (YOU ARE A FISH? immposible. delete the whole sentence.)
(Read the passage carefully.)


A SOUND CALLING.
(A sound does not call. Someone calls. A sound echoes, or your hear a sound.)


I QUICKLY TURNED towards the direction OF THE SOUND SOURCE.
I quickly turned towards the direction of the sound.


MY TEARS STARTING TO DROP.
My tears started to drop.


I was fallen asleep!
I had fallen asleep!


it let me TO SEE my mother again!
It let me see my mother again!