中文譯英文~急哇哇

你還記得嗎?以前每年我們都會一起過生日,真的很懷念以前的日子!
Do you remember? We previously celebrated the each year birthday together, I really very cherish the past!


**希望我譯嘅題主啱用。另外，請題主唔好移除問題，仲有，如果題主覺得我嘅回答啱用嘅話，請揀我嘅回答做最佳回答，唔該晒！**

2010-04-20 20:08:24 補充：
補充少少，上面譯文寫嘅 "past" 可以改做 "past day"，意思係一樣嘅。

To shake your memory for our sake. Those were that days we spend our birthdays every year. Aren't those times worth anything?

應該比直譯深很多，真擔心你都睇唔明，不過把你的心情和想對方感到那種張力都寫了，而且是用詩格來寫的，所以句法未必跟你的相同，但力度相同。希望是你想要的英文。

你還記得嗎?以前每年我們都會一起過生日,真的很懷念以前的日子!

Can you recall that we spent the (your) birthday together almost every year. I really miss the good old days.

Remember, simple english is the best english.

Do you still remember the days when we celebrated our birthday together every year? I really miss those good old days!

Do you still remember? Every year birthday we also celebrate together, I really to cherish the memory of that day.....