✔ 最佳答案
除了文法，有些意思表達得不大清楚，我憑着猜想去表達意見。如有猜錯，請提出來。以下是我的建議：
We should not be required to take a test in our studies. For example, some schoolmates only study extra-curriculm subjects, which are about interesting things. They will not hesitate to take these subjecs because they are outside the curriculum. When an extra-curriculum subject finally changes into a curriculum subject requiring a test, these schoolmates lose interest in the study. Although usally reading related books, and pondering about things outside the curriculum definitely helps the studies, it is important to remember not to spend too much time, otherwise the extra-curriculum knwledge in the curriculum will be neglected.
Sentence 1: Changed the phrase [test study] as it is not clear.
Sentence 2: changed [curricular suject] to extra-curriculm because the second part of the sentence says the subject is outsidethe curriculum.
Sentence 3: changed the word [look] to [read] books. Changed the word [flowered] to [spend time], assuming it was translated from the words [花時間]。
2009-04-03 00:19:41 補充：
因有字數限制，所以在這裏補充。
第一句: Although we should not to take a test study,
(1) 跟着的 For example 己是新一句的開始，所以這句的結尾應是 full stop， 不是 comma.
(2) 由於是獨定立句子，不能用 although 來做開始。
(3) should not 後面的 infinitive 是不須要 [to] 的。
(4) 不大清楚 [test study] 的意思。猜想是解 [study or subject which reguires a to pass a test]， 對否？
2009-04-03 00:55:04 補充：
第二句：For example ........ loses the study the interest.
這句子太長了，所以建議分成三句。
(1) 猜想 [curricular subject] 是指 [extra-curriculum]
(2) 我將 some interesting questions 轉為 interesting things，其實應該照原文。
(3) [loses the study the interest] 可能造是從 [失了學習的興趣] 用 translator 轉成英文。英文的講法是 [失了興趣去學習]。
2009-04-06 03:54:44 補充：
我相信樓主的問題是誠心的。他的英文不好，出來公開求助，這種求學態度正是我要尊敬的。
有知識友曾在白我介紹中說過：
沒有愚蠢的問題，惟有不發問的問題才是愚蠢的。
樓主，加油。
