要不要which?要不要are?(10)

1.Actually ,teen idols can become popular (which ) is based on their talent , personality and attitute of work.
要加which的寫法
Actually, teen idols can become popular, which is based on their talent, personality, and attitute of work.
← 注意關代which前的逗號不可省略, 這是一種補述用法, 是以"teen idols can become popular"整個主要子句為其先行詞.
不需which的寫法
Actually, teen idols' being able to become popular is based on their talent, personality, and attitute of work.
← 這是把原來的主要子句轉變為being動名詞片語"teen idols' being able to become popular"整個作為主詞, teen idols'是所有格, "is based on"是動詞, 其後是受詞, 這個結構自然就不需要which了.
2.Their personality (are) also attract some fans . (X)
→ Their personality also attracts some fans. (O)
不需要are, 因為已經有動詞attracts了.
personality是三單, 所以attract要加s.

2009-03-18 15:36:51 補充：
用單數personality, 表示這些teen idols的共同特質;
也可用複數personalities, 表示這些teen idols的各自特質, 那麼動詞attract就不需加 s了.
需要are的寫法: Their personalities are also attractive to some fans.
attract改為形容詞attractive, 就需要are了.

which要加
are不用


第一題因為"teen idols can become popular"是自成一個句子
一個句子中只能有一個動詞(除非有連結詞)
所以原po原本的句子就出現兩個動詞(can become跟is)


attract已經是動詞了
除非改成Their personality are also attractive to some fans .


你這樣問所以我這樣答
但老實說第一題
我比較建議翻成
Actually ,the fact that teen idols can become popular is because of their talent , personality and attitute to work.


最後
attitute後面應該是接about/to/toward


希望有幫助囉：)

1.Actually, teen idols can become popular (which ) is base on their talent, personality and attitute of work.

[說明]要加which因為前面已有一個動詞become，是主要子句，後面的附屬子句（內有動詞is based）需要一個既可當連接詞又可當其主詞的字，which剛好可以勝任這個職務。沒有which全句有兩組動詞，就錯了。
你的base應打成based才對。

2.Their personality (are) also attract some fans .
[說明］不需要are，因為後面有了動詞attract

第一個不用加

因為:

1.Actually，青少年的神像可能变得普遍()是基本的在工作他們的天分、個性和attitute。

這樣好像怪怪的

第二個就要加了

因為:

2.Their個性(是)也吸引有些狂热爱好者。