可以幫我correct errors 嗎? thanks!

2008-06-24 12:24 am
"werrt" was my nickname when I was a teenager.
I use this name of"werrt" in the art field sicnce then because it is unique, just as my works.

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everybody's childhood has a dream
my childhood dream is to eascape from school,
escape into the forest i had dreamt

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2008-06-24 6:15 am
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Below is my correction which is for reference only. I don't think that it's the best way to only amend some wordings regardless of grammatical mistakes .
I was given a nickname "Werrt" when I was a child/teenager . Since then, this neckname has been used as alternative name in the art sector in which I have been engaged because it is unique .
Maybe everybody has a dream during his/her childhood. However, I have a special dream - escaping from school or hiding myself in the forest .

2008-06-26 18:49:33 補充:
Typing mistake : Since then, this neckname ...-------> Since then, this nickname ...
2008-06-28 1:31 am
"Werrt" was my nickname when I was a teenager.
I use this name in the art field after then because it was unique, just as
my works.

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Everybody in a childhood had a dream. My dream was to escape from
schoo into forest where the place I always dream of.
參考: AL is A1
2008-06-24 1:29 am
"Wert" was my nickname when I was a teenager.
Since then, I had used the said nickname in the art field because it was unique, just as my works.

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Everybody did have a dream in childhood.
My dream was to escape from school and
walk into the forest that I had ever dreamt.

2008-06-23 17:30:53 補充:
works
amended as "work"
2008-06-24 1:21 am
"Werrt" was my nickname when I was a teenager.
I have used this name in the art field since then because it is unique, just as my works. (I assume you use that name in the art field since you were a teenager. If not, then it should be "I use this name in the art field because it is unique...)

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everybody has a dream in his childhood.
Mine was to escape from school,
escape into the forest where I had always been dreaming of.
2008-06-24 12:53 am
"werrt" was my nickname when I was a teenager.
I used this name (no of)"werrt" in the art field since then because it is unique, just as my works.

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everybody's has a dream in his childhood
my dream was to escape from the school,
escape into the forest where I had always been dreaming of
參考: Myself


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