I am deeply appreciated/grateful your kindness. Thank you for bring me become one of a memeber at our hotel. I feel welcome on my firist day in Chicago and on the job. Thank you for your take care. It makes me feel warm in Chicag o without my faimily. Thank you for selecting me to take the leadership development class. It makes me learning and imporving a lot on my job. thank you again for the opportunity to select me here to meake my life different.
請幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??
2008-06-13 7:32 pm
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2008-06-13 8:34 pm
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I am very grateful for your knidness. Thank you very much for allowing me to become one of the memebers in your hotel. I felt welcomed on my firist day in Chicago and at my work place. I also thankful for your caring; it made me felt warm, even though I am not with my family. Besides, I am thankful for supporting me to attend a leadership development course. Through that course, I improved my skills and learned new skills, it was great that I attended that course. Thank you once again for every thing that you had offered to me. You had changed my life (toward a brighter future).( )→optional
2008-06-13 12:37:05 補充：
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2008-06-13 9:22 pm
mancheung323 said well. If you look at some guys' records you will find that there are questioners and questioners.
2008-06-13 7:54 pm
Why should people help you? Please look back your record!
2008-06-13 14:59:07 補充：
I had answered this guy before but the question was then deleted shortly after the answer was made.
2008-06-13 14:59:07 補充：
I had answered this guy before but the question was then deleted shortly after the answer was made.
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