跪求翻譯英文

1. On 12 February 2008, some residents wrote jointly making a request for the addition of a lift from the G/F to the 3/F podium. After discussion, the Committee recommends conducting a feasibility study for the proposed works.
2. After on-site survey, the Engineer made the following report on the feasibility for various proposed locations:
A. Proposed Location 1
i. The area to be built-over at the G/F carriageway is Government land which needs to be acquired from the Government.
ii. It is necessary to buy certain car-parking spaces which will be occupied by the works. Also, the use of the affected portion of the carriageway cannot be changed without payment of premium to the Government and approval from the Buildings Department due to restriction on permitted plot ratio.
iii. A huge sum of money is involved for the required works including Ground investigation, addition/alteration works to the slope, foundation works, superstructure works, lift installation etc.
B. Proposed Location 2
i. It is necessary to buy the land at the G/F park from ABC Chamber of Commerce.
ii. Due to insufficient width of carriageway and restriction on permitted plot ratio, payment of premium to the Government and approval from the Buildings Department are required to change the use of the carriageway at 3/F podium.
iii. A huge sum of money is involved for the required works including Ground investigation, addition/alteration works to the slope, foundation works, superstructure works, lift installation etc.
C. Proposed Location 3
i. Approvals from the Buildings Department and the Fire Services Department are necessary for the extinguishment of an exit staircase (or a staircase serving as the means of escape).
ii. Required structural alterations to the floors concerned affect the building and slope structures and a huge sum of money is involved.

2008-03-11 12:03:56 補充：
3. Conclusion

After site survey and assessment of feasibility, our conclusions are as follows:

i. Proposed Locations 1 & 2 - they involve land that does not belong to this Estate and thus the feasibility is considered low.

2008-03-11 12:04:06 補充：
ii. Proposed Location 3 - the land involved are self-owned but the cancellation of exit staircase and building and slope alterations require approvals from the Buildings Department and the Fire Services Department. Also, the cost of works is very high. Thus, the feasibility is considered low.

起初未有004及005時, 我都覺得003最好,但而家覺得004及005都真係高手之作,各有長短,尤其政府部門名稱及一些技術用語完全係最合適的,真係難以取捨,但003都唔差.
diverseman007講得好啱,我的心情亦同emma666888一樣....004 & 005邊個最好呢........?

2008-03-19 21:20:26 補充：
bilinguechina:
其實我已經投了你一票,不過最後都係N70(005)最高票率,如果有番"最佳答案"就好.
但事實你同N70的譯本都真係好合用,有極高參考價值,真係多謝晒.......請受小弟一拜~~

在004和005之間猶豫來著,各有譯得好和疏漏的地方,不過選擇了4…

1. On the 12th Feb., 2008, some of the flat owners and tenants submitted a jointly signed letter appealing for the retrofitting of a lift at the location from the ground floor to the 3d floor platform. After discussion, the Committe put forward some suggestions on the feasbility of implementing the works.
2.The engineers have made a report on the works,proposing some locations for retrofitting a lift after taking on-site survey. A. The Proposed Location I-Traffic roads on G/F and the platform: i. It is necessary to buy the land in this location which belongs to the Government ii. Unless the purchase of car-parking space from those who are owners becomes to success, the retrofitting works at the location which occupied the traffice road on the platform cannnot be conducted . In addition, the partial car-parking space which belongs to " the ratio of land area usable" cannot be used with no approval for alteration of land use from the Buildings Department and without paying extra land prices to the Government before commencement of works. iii.The works (including soil-probing, slopes-rebuilding, foundation-building, retrofitting lift and lift's supper construction) will employ a large sumof funds.
B.The Proposed Location II - G-Gate Park and 3/F traffic road on the platform: i. It is necessary to buy the land of G-Gate Park which belongs to the XXX Association. ii. The location - 3/F traffic road on the platform which is not wide and belongs to "the ratio of land area usable" needs paying extra land prices and getting prior approval for alteration of land use. iii. The same as A(iii) mentioned.
C.The Proposed Location III : i. The cancellation of one path for means of escape requires approval from the Buildings Department and the Fire Services Department . ii. The retrofitting works involving a lot of construction alterations related to slopes, each floor or even the whole building need a large sum of funds .

2008-03-10 22:07:31 補充：
Conclusion : Below is a summary after making on-site survey and assesment on the feasbility of retrofitting a lift at the three locations mentioned above.
I.The Proposed Location I & II is impossible because the land does not belong to our Estate.

2008-03-10 22:13:00 補充：
Conclusion : II. The Proposed Location III which belongs to our Estate's property also become impossible because the cancellation of a path for means of fire and the construction alteration needs approval from the Buildings Department and the Fire Services Department .

2008-03-10 22:14:28 補充：
Conclusion : II . What's more important , the above works will draw on a large sum of funds .

2008-03-17 20:50:50 補充：
Questioner :

First of all, I don't mind if my answer(No.004) is not chosen in consideration of exchanging knowledge. In my opinion, you are required to choose the most appropriate sentences of the two answers Nos.004 & 005 respectively to form your report .

樓主和回答者 : 恕我直言, 回答者No. 001 和 No.002都是machine translation , 其譯文錯誤百出 .而回答者No.003是人手譯, 雖屬word-word translation, 也有不少語法錯誤, 但他花了不少功夫為樓主譯, 此精神值得學習和讚賞. 相信樓主會自選最佳答案 , 并不會亂選答案吧! 如有冒犯, 敬請諒解 !

跪求翻譯英文
1. In 12th Feb 2008, some of the clients joining together to write to us about demanding to build a lift from Ground floor to the 3rd floor platform. After discussed with the committee, they suggest to investigate the possibility of the above suggestion.
2. After the engineer observe the site, they have the following report:
A. In area 1.
i. The ground floor area belongs to the government, we need to purchase that area of land if we proceed the work.
ii. On the 3rd floor platform, it linked to the parts of the parking space, we need to purchase those related parking space from their owner if we proceed the work. Also, part of the road would be due to the "could be used area porportion rate" and need to pay extra land tax, and also, it is needed to be approved by the Housing Authority.
iii. The work needs to be have a land test, rebuild the slope and base structure, as well as the the top cover sturcture in order to build a new lift, the above procedures would cost a lots of money.
B. In area 2.
i. The G gate of park belongs to the Commerce Committee, we need to purchasethe land of the Commerce Committee, if we proceed the work.
ii.The size of the road on 3rd floor is too narrow, due to the "could be used area proportion rate", we need to get approval from the Housing Authority to change the land use.

iii. The work needs to be have a land test, rebuild the slope and base structure, as well as the the top cover sturcture in order to build a new lift, the above procedures would cost a lots of money.

C. In area 3.
i. We need to get approval from the Housing Authority to cancel a fire escape runway.
ii. The work need to change the structure of every floor, rebuild the whole building structure and slope structure, it would cost a large sum of money.



2008-03-08 17:36:02 補充：
3. Conclusion:

According to the above three area under observation and assessment, we made the following conclusion:

i. The planned lift area 1 & 2 does not belongs to our estate area, so the possibility of the work is very small.

2008-03-08 17:36:59 補充：
ii. In area 3, although that piece of land belongs to our estate area, the work would cancel the fire escape runway, whole building structure and slope structure, it needs the approval of the Housing Authority and the Fire Department.

2008-03-08 17:37:30 補充：
Also, the rebuild work costs a big sum of money, so the possibility of the proceed is not big.

1.2008 years on February 12, has the partial owner incoming letter to propose jointly the request extension lift leads to the 3/F platform incident by G. Discusses after the committee, suggested that carries on discusses feasibility of this project.

2. passes through engineer to extend the position after on-site inspection feasibility, and makes following reported:


The armour, plans to extend position 1.

i. plans to extend G vehicle route position land belongs to the government place, if carries on the extension project, then needs to buy to the government.
because the ii.3/F vehicle route platform involves takes the partial berth, must purchase the berth to the owner only then to be possible to carry on the extension project. Because the partial vehicle route also “may use the acreage ratio” the relations to need the land premium and must by the house bureau authorisation change use.
the iii. project needs to carry on searches the earth, the extension/reconstruction pitch, ground building, the top head structure, extends architectural engineering and so on lift, therefore involves the project amount to be huge.

The second grade, plans to extend position 2.

i. plans to extend the G floodgate park position land belongs to the chamber of commerce, if carries on the extension project, then must buy to the chamber of commerce.
because the ii.3/F vehicle route platform the vehicle route width is insufficient, because also “may use the acreage ratio” the relations, needs the land premium and must by the house bureau authorisation change use.
the iii. project needs to carry on searches the earth, the extension/reconstruction pitch, ground building, the top head structure, extends architectural engineering and so on lift, therefore involves the project amount to be huge.

2008-03-08 17:14:30 補充：
Third, plans to add position 3.

because i. must cancel one to accidentally discharge the staircase channel, must and the fire department authorises by the house bureau.

2008-03-08 17:14:44 補充：
the ii. project must change each structure, the reconstruction involves the entire building construction structure and the pitch structure, therefore involves the project amount to be huge.

2008-03-08 17:14:55 補充：
3. summaries plan after above three extends the position to make the inspection and the appraisal feasibility, makes following conclusion i. to plan to extend the lift position 1 and the position 2, the land does not belong to this property industry power scope, therefore the feasibility is not big.

2008-03-08 17:15:40 補充：
ii. plans to extend the lift position 3, although the land belongs to this property industry power scope, but rebuilds involves cancels accidentally discharges the staircase channel,

2008-03-08 17:15:45 補充：
the entire building construction structure and the pitch structure, must have the house bureau and the fire department approves the nucleus. Another building alteration expense is huge, therefore the feasibility is not big.

1. February 12, 2008, some operators joint letter requests additional lift from the floor to the G / F of the platform. After deliberation by the Commission proposed to explore the feasibility of the project.

2. Engineers to the scene to inspect the feasibility of building location, and make the following reports:

A proposed location of a building.

I. to be built G-road vehicle location site is part of the Government, such as carrying out construction projects, the need for the Government to buy land.
Ii.3 / F platform, was involved in road vehicles occupied most of the parking spaces required parking spaces to the owners to buy additional works can be conducted. Driveway was also part of the "can be used to plot ratio" requires premium and the need for change approved by the Buildings Department.
Iii. Need for the preliminary engineering, construction / alteration slope, creating a foundation, site structure, such as building additional lift, it involves a huge amount of work.

B, 2 to be built here.

I. to be built G Gate Park location is land belonging to chambers of commerce, such as carrying out construction works, then to the Chamber of Commerce to buy land.
Ii.3 / F car platforms for less than the width of road vehicles, also "may use the plot ratio" relations between the premium and the need to change the uses approved by the Buildings Department.
Iii. Need for the preliminary engineering, construction / alteration slope, creating a foundation, site structure, such as building additional lift, it involves a huge amount of work.

2008-03-08 17:00:23 補充：
C, and to position 3.

I. cancelled due to a fire escape staircase access, the need approval from the Buildings Department and the Fire Services Department. ii. Works to change floors structure, alteration of the entire building structures and slope structure, it involves a huge amount of work.

2008-03-08 17:00:58 補充：
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