Please correct the sentences.

2007-12-12 12:40 am
Please help me to correct the following sentences. Thank you.

1.Like any other violent's crime, 10 students who beat up two of their schoolmates should be arrested and charged.

2. One of my boy friends disliked me using make-up.

3.Shy and retiring, modest and hard working, this girl knowledge and experience is very immense.

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2007-12-12 2:15 am
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1)
Like many other people who have committed violent crimes, the 10 students who beat up 2 of their schoolmates should also be arrested and charged with (common) assault.

2)
One of my boy friends disliked my make-up / me to wear make-up.

3)
Being shy and retiring, modest and hard working, this girl is immensely knowledgeable and experienced.
2007-12-12 10:07 pm
1. Like any other violence crime, 10 students who beat up two of their school mates should be arrested and charged.
2. One of my boyfriend disliked me using make up.
3. ???????????????Sorry


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