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Good afternoon, everybody! Today I would like to recommend a book to you, which is called "A little Wolf Detective in the Forest " . This book describes the advansture of a little wolf detective who worked in the Yelloweyes Forest Dective Agency specialing in the investigation of mysterious disapperances in the fretted forest .
The two main characters of this book are Little Wolf and Furlock . I like this book because the story is interesting . Moreover, It is easy to understand what the author said because of its simple English. Therefore, I think that this book is very suitable for teenager readers . We can borrow it from the Hong Kong Public libraries .

Hope this helps !

good afternoon teachers and classmates,today i would like to introduce this book to you.the name of this book is little wolf forest detective.it talks about a little wolf 's adventures as a member of the yelloweyes forest detective agency,crime solvers of the frettnin forest,as they investigate a series of mysterious disappearances.
the main characters in this book are little wolf and furlock.i like this book because the story is interesting and use simple vocab.this book is very suitable for teenager to read. it is available in the library for loan.

It sounds good for a speech....=)