Re-write in English

We suggest the distribution centre be set up in Kwai Chung of Hong Kong. According to the information from property agency, the rent of this location is lower than that of other locations of Hong Kong and it is close to Kwai Chung Container Terminals and within easy reach of Hong Kong commercial centres and airport. The loading of containers will be very convenient. The space need not be too large. The estimated required space is 20,000 sq. ft.

We suggest setting up the Distribution Centre in Kwai Chung near Kwai Chung Container Terminals within easy reach of Hong Kong' s commercial centres and airport in consideration of providing much more convenient venue for the container-loading services . In addition, the rental rates in this location is lower than those in Hong Kong side according to the information from the property agents . Although the Distribution Centre' s area should not be too large , it should have an estimated area of 20,00 sq.ft.

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2007-10-15 23:27:17 補充：
Correction : 1st sentence : We suggest .........>We suggested

We suggested that the distribution Centre should be set up at Kwai Chung in Hong Kong. According to the informations from the property agency, this is a lower rent location than the others. It is near Kwai Chung Container Terminals and it's also very convenience to get to Hong Kong's commercial centres and the airport as well. Container loading will be very flexible. The area doesn't have to be too big, estimate spaces about 20,000 sq.ft.

commends: Sentences are too long... I think you can use past tense for suggest coz it already happened. "within easy reach" doesn't make any sense.... and I've changed it... 'no need' is very wrong in grammar ... use doesn't need....

We suggest that the distribution Centre could be set up in Kwai Chung, Hong Kong. According to the information provided by the property agency, the rent in Kwai Chung is lower than other areas in Hong Kong. Furthermore, the Kwai Chung Container Terminals is in the same area which means a shorter distance and easier transportation to Hong Kong’s commercial centres and International Airport. Container loading will be very convenience. The area would need to be approximately 20,000 sq.ft.

Hope it helps!

We suggest that the Distribution Centre be set up in Kwai Chung because of its location near Kwai Chung Container Terminals and within easy reach of Hong Kong' s commercial centres and airport . It thus provides much more convenience for the operations of container-loading. In addition , the rent of this location is lower than those of in Hong Kong side . It is estimated that the Distribution Centre requires an area of 20,000 sq.ft.

Hope this helps !

2007-10-15 14:28:31 補充：
Correction : In addition, the rent of this location .... ----------> In addition, the rent of this location .......according to the information from the property agency .

We suggest the distribution Centre to be set up at Kwai Chung in Hong Kong. According to information from property agency, the rental of Kwai Chung is lower, she closes to Kwai Chung Container Terminals, commercial centres and Hong Kong Airport. The transportation of loading will be very convenience. The area estimates about 20,000 sq.ft.

We suggest the distribution Centre set up in Kwan Chung in Hong Kong. According to information from property agency. This location is lower rent than other location in Hong Kong and then nearby Kwan Chung Container Terminals and within easy reaches of Hong Kong’s commercial centers and airport. Container loading will be very convenience. The area no need too big. The estimate spaces 20,000 esq.