有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

The researcher is particularly indebted to Huie Max, the Chief Engineer of The Fairmont Waterfront Centre in Vancouver for completing the previous survey . The survey in explication/explanation of the current writing structures and formats contributes significantly /greatly to those authors in dealing with the presentation of their reports . The survey review in this report is written by Meng Ru Xuan from the Swiss Hotel Management School . She is responsible for carrying out certain independent surveys in accordance with the institutional procedures , and has to consider seriously all reviews/comments on this report . It rests with her full responsiblility for the final contents of this report .


2007-01-11 18:47:04 補充：
Correction : Being in charge of making certain independent investigations on this report in accordance with the instituional procedures,she is required to consider carefully all reviews/comments . The responsibility of verifying the final contents of this report rests entirely with the author .

2007-01-11 18:53:06 補充：
Correction : Being in charge of making certain independent investigations on this report in accordance with the institutional procedures , she is required to consider carefully all reviews/comments . The responsibility of verifying the final contents of this report rests entirely with the author .