有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

2007-01-08 6:50 pm
Prominently, an experience is conducted from the Fairmont Green Partnership program, which was named winner of the prestigious 2006 Global Tourism Business Award. The reason for why the researcher interested in the Fairmont hotel Green Partnership program, is it has a long history of environmental stewardship, assist researcher to define on research findings.

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2007-01-08 7:20 pm
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From the paragraph, I am not sure whether you tried to say it is the Fairmond Green Partnership program who conducted an experience or an experience is conducted on the Fairmont Green Partnership program. However, from the content of the paragraph, I am guess that an experience is conducted on the Fairmont Green Partnership program. I suggest to revise the paragraph as below:

"An experience is conducted on the winner of prestigious 2006 Global Tourism Business Award, the Fairmont Hotel Green Partnership program. Researchers are interested in the Faimont Hotel Green Partnership program as it has a long history of environmental stewardship which assists researchers to define research findings."
2007-01-10 7:15 am
An experiment in the Fairmont Green Parnership Program , the winner of the prestigious Global Tourism Business Award 2006 , is prominently conducted . The reason why those researchers are interested in the Fairmont Hotel Green Partnership Program is its long history in providing environmental stewardship for the researchers to define the research findings .






2007-01-08 8:03 pm
Promptly, an experiment has been conducted. With the successful experiment, the Fairmont Green Partnership Program was named winner of the prestigious 2006 Global Tourism Business Award. The reason for why the researchers were interested in the Fairmont Hotel Green Partnership Program was due to its a long history of environmental stewardship, which greatly assisted the researchers to define their research findings.


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