有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

Indeed, among the more interesting aspects the revolutionary sights are seen in Goangdong province , and the Communist Party Academy is a fascinating unit studying the insight into the foundation of the PRC ' s political party . Overall, the objective of the authorities concerned in Guangzhou in setting up a special fund(several million yuans) is to give money reward to encourage more citizens to provide information about crime syndicates.