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The living standard in Guangzhou is relatively high and there are leisure activities that suit people of all tastes. Karaoke bars, discotheques, bowling and snooker games are popular in the city. Besides, there are opera houses and cultural centres for art performance lovers, golf clubs and tennis courts for the many elite enthusiasts there.

The living standard in Guangzhou is relatively high .In this city, there are numerous amusement venues for meeting people ' s tastes , like karaoke bars , discotheques, bowling alleys, snooker centres . Besides, there are culture centres and theatres for the performance of opera - Chinese elegant art . And golf clubs and tennis courts have attracted many elite enthusiasts to go there .