英文grammar改正!!!

Actually, there are some gramatical mistakes (not just the bracket) in the sentences. Since the backgroud of your case is not clear, therefore, some words may not fit the meanings.

- I'm afraid we never producing (these/such???) goods.
**** I'm afraid --> We sure/ promise
**** producing --> produce
**** (these/ such) goods --> the goods which you mentioned

- It (costs only/only costs) 5% more than the old one.
**** costs only
**** more --> higher


- 11st/11th???
**** 11th

- A comparison of the quality of our products with that rival ones will show you that ours (is/are???) far more superior.
**** (suggestion):- We assure you that the quality of our products are the best among the producers in this industry.


- It's the excellent quality that makes it worth the (difference in price/price difference???).
**** (suggestion):- You can have the excellent quality of the goods by just spending a little bit more.

- we have no other choice (to???) give up the deal.
**** (I don't know your meaning indeed) Using "to" is OK in this sentence!

Good Luck

1. I' m afraid that we never produce the goods you demanded .
2. It costs only 5% higher than the old one .
3. 11th
4. The quality comparision shows you that our products are much more superior to that rival .
5. Our products, the most excellent quality , are worth costing the difference in price .
6. We have no alternative but to give up the deal .
7. Frankly speaking , I don' t believe that this is your lowest price . If you are sincere and do not want to delay, I can consider whether we could make a move or not .

I'm afraid we never producing these goods.
It costs only 5% more than the old one.
11th
A comparison of the quality of our products with the quality of the rival ones will show you that ours are far more superior.
It's the most excellent quality that makes it worth the price difference.
we have no other choice but to give up the deal.
Truly speaking, I don't believe this is your lowest price. If you are sincere and do not want to delay, I consider can consider whether we could make a move.



2006-12-12 12:44:08 補充：
CORRECTION :If you are sincere and do not want to delay, I can consider whether we could make a move.