大家可唔可以幫我改正呢篇野0既文法錯誤?

Before starting to do the case-study subject on how to help Sammy improve his relationship with his family , I have to gather all the information about and some sample solutions to this case available from reference books . During the process of case-studying , I have learnt some knowledge and skills of human communications, for example , just saying a few words or giving a phone call to your relatives , can express your loving-heart and lessen obstacles or blocks in communications .

Since then , I tried to call my father at least twice a day, just to say : " have you had a lunch ? " or " are you tired after work ? " But I am sure that my father is really touched beyond words .

基本上, 你篇野無分句. 句子太長. 意思重覆.

when I started to find some possible solution to the case of Sammy who wanted to improve his relationship with his family, I learned a lot from the reference finding process. I found that a phone call or even a few words could help us expressing our love.

Then I tried to call my father twice a day. Sometimes i just say some general things like 'have you had your lunch yet?' or 'are you tired after work?'. But I'm sure that my father can feel my affections for him.