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Everyone always wants to buy somethings daily . If I had as much pocket money as you had/ If I had much pocket money) , I would spend it on/for travelling, a mobile phone and books that I like ( very much ). A mobile phone can be used for informing someone of the place where I have got lost during hiking . I really love the latest mobile phone Model No.410 . I wish for buying such a mobile phone and for bringing it to my home now . To travel to Spain is my dream because there are Spaniard who are generous and would make friend with vistors . That' s why I do want to go there if I have much pocket money .

2006-12-10 20:18:16 補充：
Correction : somethings ---- something

Everyone always wants to something daily. If I have a lot of pocket money, I would spend it on travelling, buying a mobile phone and books. All of them are my favours. A mobile phone can know where is the the location when missing the way in hiking. The latest model " 410" that I like it much. I wish I can bring to home now. Spain is the country that I want to go since there are generous Spainard who want making friends. If I have so much money, I could travel to there.

People always want to buy something daily. If I had as much pocket money as I could, I would spend it on travelling, mobile telephone and books. I have a lot of habits. People can find me through my cell phone if I got lost during hiking. I really love the latest '410' mobile phone model. I wish I can take it home now. Spain is my dream place and there are generous Spaniards who are friendly. So, if I had enough pocket money, I would definitely organize a journey to Spain..