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I thought today wasn’t having a good weather; however the Star Avenue was still full of people. Thank Jesus Christ, today wasn’t raining, and the interview was well-going. At first everyone seemed a bit shy, which took us so long to find a suitable foreign interviewee. Many tourists said that Hong Kong’s air is too dirty, which quite disappointed them; yet they claimed that they will visit Hong Kong again. I have selected x and y for the interview, both of them were nice and friendly English tourists, and that made the conversation much easier.

(Perhaps there are some mistakes-- perhaps many-- but I hope my translation can help you *v*)

Although the weather that day was not very good, the Avenue of Stars were still bursting with many visitors . Thank Jesus - God for taking the reins to the weather, that day come no rain-falling , thus enabling us to perform the interview smoothly . At the beginning, we were battle-shy and we spent much time in seeking the right foreigners for the performance of interview . Most visitors were disappointed because of serious air pollution in Hong Kong, but they might visit Hong Kong again . For my interviewees , I chose X and Y coming from England . It was kind of them both to make my interview performance free and easy .

Despite today's weather was not very good, there were still many visitors at the Avenue Of Stars. Thanks Jesus, it didn't rain today. As a result, the interview was carried out smoothly. At the beginning, we were quite afraid to find a suitable foreigners and approach them for interview. Many visitors agreed that the air pollution in Hong Kong make them a little bit disappointed, but they may visit Hong Kong again. I chose X and Y, who come from England, to be my interviewees. They were so friendly that our conversation become very free insensibly.

Although the weather of that day was not very good, there were still a lots of tourists on Avenue of Stars. Thanks god. That was not a rainy day. The interview was conducted smoothly. We were shy at the beginning and we spent a lot of time in locating the right foreigners to conduct the interview. Most tourists were disappointed by the air pollution in Hong Kong, though they are willing to come again in the future. X and Y were selected to conduct the interview. They both come from the United Kingdom. They are nice and friendly. And our discussion was held in a relax manner then.