Native English speakers, could you please help me with these issues?

2021-04-12 3:51 pm

Is this sentence correct:

"The dolphin came to the surface of the water, and let out a squeal."

回答 (3)

2021-04-12 4:05 pm

It is OK, just a bit verbpse.
"The dolphin came to the surface, and let out a squeal."

A Dolphin is already known to occupy water.

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2021-04-12 5:21 pm

A comma isn’t needed after water

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2021-04-13 12:53 am

Unlike what you might have seen in the Flipper movies, in real life dolphins do not emit squeals.

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