please correct my english?

2020-12-29 12:57 pm
can you please rewrite this to make it natural and grammatical correct? im talking about some old photos. im not native speaker thanks!

“Even if we could not be able to travel home this winter holidays, I'm very thankful that I have these photos so to look back on happy and safe times. I am missing you all a little extra this festive time of the year, but knowing everyone is healthy and on good spirits is more than makes up for it.”

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2020-12-29 1:52 pm
“Even though it is not safe to travel home for the winter holidays this year, I'm thankful that I have these photos to look back on our happy and safe times. I am missing you all a little extra this festive time of the year, but knowing everyone is healthy and in good spirits more than makes up for it.” If you want an expert opinion, head over to Education and Reference and post your question in Homework Help.


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