「有機會的話......」中翻英?

2020-07-16 3:17 am
對話如下:
「你也喜歡攝影?」
「是的,只是興趣。」
「有機會的話我也想看看(你的作品)。」

如題,最後一句的英文該怎麼翻呢><?

回答 (8)

2020-07-21 3:48 pm
Do you like photo-shooting too?

Yes, but it is just for fun.

If possible, would you show me your work?
2020-07-16 4:35 pm
Type of conditional clauses and tenses involved in Probable or Open Condition with the omission of "if" in conditional:-
(a)Supposing (that) I should have the opportunity, I shall take a look.
It must be rewritten as:-
(b)Should I have the opportunity, I shall take a look.(at your photograph)
2021-01-24 8:38 pm
Is there any chance that I can see your picture works?
2020-08-15 4:13 pm
Do you also like photography?
Yes, just interest.
I would also like to see your work if I have the opportunity.
2020-07-20 12:46 pm
字詞本身並不能完全發揮其表面的意思, 更重要的取決於閣下的態度/語氣/表情等等, 說法很多, 但在表達意願上, 大概仍然有從弱到強的差別 (非絕對):

"可以一看" 的客套話
It would be great if I can see your work.
                          
"願意一看" 的表示
I like to take a look at your work, if possible.

"真的想看" 的邀約
Would you show your work to me, when it suits you?
2020-07-20 11:26 am
If  I have the chance I would like to take a look(at your work).
2020-07-16 9:47 am
對話中"有機會的話"在英語句式中會放在句後/尾,因為重點是表示你"想看"的意願。因此我直譯以下:

I would like to see your [works]/(photos), if I got the chance.

[若然對方的攝影是職業/較專業的,但看來對方"只是興趣"便不應用]/(若然你們的主題是消閒或旅遊等攝影/相片)

只不過坦白說,你這說法可能是"慣性的客氣",但英語用"有機會的話"回答出來其實在對方聽來是"不太想的"意思,我只想指出這是英語人會用的習慣。

例如:同事請你幫忙代買些東西(甚至是一些工作上的幫忙),若然你說"I'll do it, when I got the chance."含意是「等我有空時才會做吧」,有些英語人說這個其實是"推搪"你。

因此就著你中文這樣寫,我會建議把英文寫成:

I would like to have the chance to see your photos.

把"有機會"夾在中間變成作為修飾/強調"你想有機會看到"而不是假設性的"有機會的話...才去看"。 用了同樣的那些英文字,但放在不同位置和組合會產生不同的意思/效果。

你自己考慮試試吧。
2020-07-16 5:33 am
>「有機會的話我也想看看(你的作品)。」
這句話的說法很多.就是要看妳要暗示甚麼:

(A)純粹的假設語氣:
這個情景應該是最適合妳所說的狀況.
I would like to take a look at your work, if I have the opportunity to.

(B)假設+請求語氣:
May I see your work if you will?

(C)久尋不遇的語氣:
I like to see your work, had I a chance.


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