Can’t break out of my cloak of. Lies,
Can’t breathe, only choke, Green skies
In the water, to drown, seems a lullaby
Can’t seem to see anything anymore, Only green skies
Does my poem have potential?
2020-01-24 3:53 am
回答 (3)
2020-01-24 4:25 am
✔ 最佳答案
I think you can post on Instagram and see if you have readers that like it.It can be good, and you can include some description of what you are talking about in your posts
2020-01-24 3:58 am
Potential for what? One note: Get rid of the period after "of", and end that line with "lies".
2020-01-24 3:58 am
Potential to be binned!!!.... you are, never have been and never will be a poet Mildred... please stop posting this rubbish over and over and over and over.
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